People learn easily from the friends beside them.
Friends have an important role in our life. They can help us to be successful, happy, and even sad. In my opinion, the fact that people learn from their friends who are beside them easily is not true. Here you can see my reasons.
Firstly, the modern technology changes people’s attitude to their friends. Nowadays, people experience a huge advancement and improvement in the different field of science and engineering such as the smartphone, the internet etc. These new inventions provide a suitable situation for the people to communicate with the professors, inventors, and the people are experts in one field. So, people can learn easily and correctly from the well-informed and knowledgeable people that totally alters peoples’ view to their friends. Actually, now people think that the friends are not eligible to teach them and people learn from the easily.
Secondly, people do not have free time. Nowadays, by emerging economical criticism around the world, persons have to start working early in the morning and continue their work until late at night to earn money for the clothes and foods. So, they do not have any free time to hang out with their friends and in most case, people eliminate their friends from their life completely. As a result, when individuals do not spend their time with their friends, there is not a strong mutual influence between them to cause people to learn from their friends easily.
On the other hand, some people think that people learn easily from their friends who are near them. Mostly, because individuals trust to their friends. The key factor of learning is being trustworthy between the learner and instructor. So, it is clear that this claim is true. However, I do not agree with this idea. Although I believe that people trust to their friends, it cannot cause them to learn from their friends easily. In fact, most of us trust to their friends, but they do not like their personalities. Hence, we try to avoid from learning easily from our friends.
In conclusion, there are a lot of reasons to prove my claim that people do not learn easily from their friends who are beside them.
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- TPO 5 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do 67
- Tpo 9. Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.I completely disagree with this claim that nowadays children are less creative than they were in the past. Here you can see my reasons. 73
- Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. 70
- Students are influenced more by their teachers than by their friends. 66
- Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90934065934 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54407322968 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480769230769 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.5567955769 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2272727273 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13636363636 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.499307625286 0.236089414692 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177074575979 0.076458572812 232% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.195720909943 0.0737576698707 265% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.369080254949 0.150856017488 245% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105504228303 0.0645574589148 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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