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Some academics who are interested in literature wonder if Rome and Juliet and Hamlet were wrote by William Shakespeare .The professor argues that the are no certain real evidence to cast doubt that those plays were wrote by William Shakespeare even though that the reading try to poke that the plays were wrote by other people.
The first area of dispute was Shakespeare origin. The professor said that He was poor and obscure as mentioned in the passage but, that dose mean that he was uneducated. The lecture argues that he gained a lot of knowledge from literature. Moreover, he was not from the aristocratic level, however, he had a plenty of opportunity to come in contact with the them and observe them. Because of this he was able to write about lives of nobility.
Another controversial issue is that less fact about his life are known to the public. The professor claims that not many records are available because, the records could be easily lost. However, the author of the reading make an argument that record may be destroyed to hidden the identity of the author of the play.
The final issue is that Francis Bacon and Shakespeare had the same writing style. The professor argues that this theory not hold up. The professor mentions that there may be some similarity in the writing between Bacon and Shakespeare, however, the writing style are completely different.
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...o are interested in literature wonder if Rome and Juliet and Hamlet were wrote by...
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...nce to cast doubt that those plays were wrote by William Shakespeare even though tha...
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...the plays were wrote by other people. The first area of dispute was Shakespear...
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... mentioned in the passage but, that dose mean that he was uneducated. The lecture...
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... knowledge from literature. Moreover, he was not from the aristocratic level, how...
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... the aristocratic level, however, he had a plenty of opportunity to come in conta...
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...cause of this he was able to write about lives of nobility. Another...
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...he identity of the author of the play. The final issue is that Francis Bacon an...
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...iting style are completely different.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 247.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89473684211 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57149088258 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550607287449 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.6150460375 49.2860985944 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.909090909 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 21.698381199 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.06452816374 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 4.19205298013 477% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.3589403974 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.7273730684 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.