TPO16-Q1
in the lecture, proffeser said three point about archaeology in the united kingdom. the united kingdom has a long and rich history of human settlement. traces of buildings, tools, and art can be found from periods of times. the science of archaeology was faced with serious problems and limitation in britain. the first point of the lecture indicated construction and buildings have preserved while the passage tells by digging foundations for new building, builders did not preserve the artifacts so many archaeologically precious artifacts were there destroyed. second there is no support for archaeological research furthermore, changing government priorities brought about periodic in funding. third, archaeology job were to be found at universities or with a few government agencies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: In
in the lecture, proffeser said three point...
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Suggestion: The
...bout archaeology in the united kingdom. the united kingdom has a long and rich hist...
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Suggestion: Traces
...g and rich history of human settlement. traces of buildings, tools, and art can be fou...
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Suggestion: The
...art can be found from periods of times. the science of archaeology was faced with s...
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Suggestion: The
...ous problems and limitation in britain. the first point of the lecture indicated co...
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Suggestion: Second
...recious artifacts were there destroyed. second there is no support for archaeological ...
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Suggestion: Third
...ties brought about periodic in funding. third, archaeology job were to be found at un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 12.0772626932 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 0.0 22.412803532 0% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 30.3222958057 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 673.0 1373.03311258 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 119.0 270.72406181 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65546218487 5.08290768461 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30283395202 4.04702891845 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17782639688 2.5805825403 123% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 145.348785872 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.739495798319 0.540411800872 137% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 419.366225166 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.0403011735 49.2860985944 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1428571429 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06452816374 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.49915109982 0.272083759551 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199882172548 0.0996497079465 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759023119326 0.0662205650399 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.49915109982 0.162205337803 308% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.8541721854 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 12.2367328918 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.42419426049 118% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 63.6247240618 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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