TPO28 -Peary’s claim
The lecture and the passage discuss the Robert E. peary claim. Although the passage claims that there are pieces of evidence that Peary had reached the north pole, the speaker refutes this idea through a number of reasons which will be described in this report.
First and foremost, the passage points out that the National Geographic Society's committes has declared that the Peary's claim is true. The speaker, in contrast, rejects this by claiming that on those time, the NAtional Geography's employees was close friends to Peary. Actually, this institution had funded plenty of money to Peary's adventure; therefore, the conclusion of this committee seems bias and is not trustworthy.
Furthermore, unlike the passage which states that Tom Avery can reach this place in thirty-seven days by dogsled so the claim of the Peary to reach the north pole in only thiry-seven days could be true, the speaker argues that the Tom's condition was different. He mentions that Tom had much less weight than Peary since he did not carry food with himself and he has sent them by ship. Also the weather at time of the Peary's claim was so unfavorable; then he could not use dogsled to reach the north pole.
Finally, although the passage says that by measuring the shadows of the Peary's photographs, scientists could adapt the shadows of this pictures with the real shadows of the those time, the professor disagrees by mentionng that this technique in not precise and can not measure the exact position of the shadow from hundred years ago. In addition, this pictures are lokk blurred and fuzzy and the shadow are faded; then, the result of this technique cannot be accurate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...h himself and he has sent them by ship. Also the weather at time of the Pearys claim...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t use dogsled to reach the north pole. Finally, although the passage says that ...
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Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
..., scientists could adapt the shadows of this pictures with the real shadows of the t...
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Line 7, column 316, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...e the exact position of the shadow from hundred years ago. In addition, this pictures a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 281.0 270.72406181 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95017793594 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43726260048 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540925266904 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.1053795 49.2860985944 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.1 110.228320801 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 21.698381199 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06452816374 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394371250808 0.272083759551 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171115515679 0.0996497079465 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117555686303 0.0662205650399 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240520399174 0.162205337803 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113256789443 0.0443174109184 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.3589403974 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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