tpo40
The author of the reading passage and the lecturer both discuss whether Venus is suitable for human to live or not. The author indicates that the conditions on Venus are so extreme and inhospitable, which makes a human presence there impossible. However, the lecturer claims that, indeed, the surface of Venus is so extreme and inhospitable that humans are not able to live there, but humanbeings can build a station floating fifteen kilometers above Venus atmosphere, which then enables human to live in the station. The lecturer then refutes each of author's theories by providing several counter-arguments.
First, the author states that the atmospheric pressure at Venus surface is several times greater than that of at Earth's surface. As a result, if humans land on Venus, the atmospheric pressure might crush human and other things as well. Nevertheless, the lecturer points out that the pressure of the station which floats above fifteen kilometers above Venus atmosphere is actually equivalent with the pressure on Earth. This, then, enables the stations to be unaffected by the heavy pressure on Venus and people can, therefore, live in it.
In addition, the author expresses that the Venus' atmosphere is made up mostly of carbon dioxide, nitrogen and other chemicals except water and oxygen. As a consequence, people might need to supply the water and oxygen to Venus from Earth. Also, the idea of maintaining a regular supply of water and oxygen is impractical in such extreme atmosphere in Venus. Conversely, the lecturer asserts that there are plenty of chemicals that can be used to produce water and oxygen in Venus. Thus, the water and oxygen necessary for humans to survive can, in fact, easily be obtained from Venus.
Finally, the author declares that there little sunlight reaches Venus' surface because most of it is reflected back to space by the thick clouds. Below these clouds is a dense layer of carbon dioxide, which blocks even more light, leading to little light reaching the surface and little electricity to power machines or equipment. Nonetheless, the lecturer reveals that the station floating above the Venus' atmosphere can actually be beneficial from the sunlight reflected from the Venus. This is because the station can absorb the sunlight from Venus. Besides, the station can also absorb sunlight from above, from the sun. Therefore, the electricity is obviously not a problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, conversely, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 30.3222958057 181% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 1373.03311258 148% => OK
No of words: 392.0 270.72406181 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1887755102 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65960730881 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 145.348785872 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456632653061 0.540411800872 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 645.3 419.366225166 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 16.0 8.23620309051 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.97526087 49.2860985944 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.052631579 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6315789474 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63157894737 7.06452816374 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.48767314816 0.272083759551 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17027448513 0.0996497079465 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745934468112 0.0662205650399 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301667886978 0.162205337803 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581513160741 0.0443174109184 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 63.6247240618 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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