TPO40 integrated
The author of the passage holds that it is impossible for human to habitat on Venus because of its extreme conditions, while the lecturer in the lecture expresses an opposite view.
To begin with, the author claims that atmospheric pressure at Venus’ surface is so high that all spacecraft and humans that try to land on it would crush. However, the lecturer rebuts that instead of building station on land, it is more favorable to establish a floating station like balloon that floats at 50 km above the surface. In this way, the high-pressure problem can be perfectly solved since we all know that atmospheric pressure decreases with altitudes – the higher the altitudes is, the lower the pressure is. As a result, the pressure at 50 km above the planet’s surface is equal to that on earth, which causes no danger to our live.
Moreover, the author believes that water and oxygen do not exist on Venus and thereby need to be transferred from Earth, which is impractical. On the contrary, the lecturer refutes that we can produce water and oxygen out of the planet’s atmosphere compounds, carbon dioxide, nitrogen and sulfuric acid, through chemical process. Besides, the fact that those chemicals can be easily accessed from atmosphere makes this solution more likely to be put into practice. Therefore, we do not need to worry about generating water and oxygen with large amount for the station mentioned above as well as human residents.
Finally, the author puts forward that there is so little sunlight reaches the Venus’ surface, ruling out the possibility that generating electricity through solar power. Instead, the lecturer retorts that the floating space station can also handle this task. It is true that the thick clouds block even all of the light, but situation is different at the level above the clouds. Also, with the use of floating station, we can collect both direct and reflected light at the same time, which facilitates not only the quantity but also the efficiency of electricity generation.
- TPO34 integrated 80
- TPO31 integrated 90
- TPO40 integrated 85
- TPO-33 - Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects.Use spec 76
- College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather thanthe courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...s true that the thick clouds block even all of the light, but situation is different at th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as a result, as well as, it is true, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 30.3222958057 155% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1373.03311258 125% => OK
No of words: 338.0 270.72406181 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06804733728 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67508798452 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 145.348785872 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547337278107 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 419.366225166 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.3550011111 49.2860985944 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.769230769 110.228320801 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 21.698381199 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06452816374 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369462049375 0.272083759551 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122534533801 0.0996497079465 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589344255043 0.0662205650399 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196153321804 0.162205337803 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599267485684 0.0443174109184 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 63.6247240618 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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