Tpo44
In this set of material, the reading passage states that a European silver coin discovered at a Native American archaeological site. People believed that this coin had been bought to North America by European explorers were called Norse, however the reading contends that some archaeologists believe that this story is fake by a person who wanted to mislead the public; hence it brings three reasons for this claim and support them, however the lecture finds all reasons dubious and provides some evidence to advocate that this occurrence is real. The information the professor provides contradicts the facts outlined in the reading.
First, the reading claims that Maine where the coin was discovered in it, had a great distance from the sites documenting as Norse in eastern Canada, so it is impossible that the explorers could have arrived there, on the contrary the professor argues that except silver coin, there were a lot of other objects that in the site, consequently it can be concluded that Norse settlements in Canada were trading with North America in this far distance.
Second, the author of reading declares that any other coins did not find in Canadian sites, as a result they could have not brought these coins to their North American settlements, in contrast the lecture contends that since these settlements had not been permanent and then they may have returned to the Europe, it is possible that these coins had not been worthwhile for people any more.
Third, the reading proposes that these Norse explorers would have known that these silver coins were not being used in America as money, consequently bringing them would have been a waste thing, conversely the professor disagrees and believes that it is true the American people were not using silver coins, however silver coins had an appealing appearance and they could attract people.
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Essay evaluation report
the reading passage states that a European silver coin discovered at a Native American archaeological site.
the reading passage states that a European silver coin is discovered at a Native American archaeological site.
there were a lot of other objects that in the site,
there were a lot of other objects that are in the site,
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2 //don't forget verbs
No. of Words: 307 250
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 6 12
No. of Words: 307 250
No. of Characters: 1530 1200
No. of Different Words: 150 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.186 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.984 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.482 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 105 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 79 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 51.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 25.043 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.497 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.792 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.209 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Discourse Markers used:
['consequently', 'conversely', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'while', 'in contrast', 'as a result', 'it is true', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244712990937 0.261695866417 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.196374622356 0.158904122519 124% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0755287009063 0.0723426182421 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0453172205438 0.0435111971325 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.036253776435 0.0277247811725 131% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129909365559 0.128828473217 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0664652567976 0.0370669169778 179% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50980105122 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0151057401813 0.0208969081088 72% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.135951661631 0.128158765124 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0211480362538 0.0158828679856 133% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00604229607251 0.0114777025283 53% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1871.0 1645.83664459 114% => OK
No of words: 307.0 271.125827815 113% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09446254072 6.08160592843 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.04852973271 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.368078175896 0.374372842146 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.273615635179 0.287516216867 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172638436482 0.187439937562 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0944625407166 0.113142543107 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50980105122 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521172638436 0.539623497131 97% => OK
Word variations: 53.1389878215 53.8517498576 99% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0529801325 46% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 51.1666666667 21.7502111507 235% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 144.135063974 49.3711431718 292% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 311.833333333 132.220823453 236% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.1666666667 21.7502111507 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.5 0.878197800319 285% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.39072847682 0% => OK
Readability: 78.5282301846 50.5018328374 155% => OK
Elegance: 1.58695652174 1.90840788429 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.745001657353 0.549887131256 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.257744934013 0.142949733639 180% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.113680609478 0.0787303798458 144% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.805837522364 0.631733273073 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.227973839096 0.139662658121 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.449624131035 0.266732575781 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080438803574 0.103435571967 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.400086994555 0.414875509568 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0725559433322 0.0530846634433 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.522166386929 0.40443939384 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813631251124 0.0528353158467 154% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.26048565121 23% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.49668874172 57% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.1766004415 31% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 10.2958057395 58% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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