TPO50 -Integrated task
The reading states that the current and ongoing worth considering effort of scientists about possibility of sending humans to mars in future. The author mentions that some problems which can make this exceptional event unlikely to occure. To contrary, the speaker opposes each of the arguments described by the author by expressing the feasiable solution, plus she states that this event is definitely challenging.
First of all, the article mentions the problems related to crutial resources such as food, water and oxygen. it is pointed out that this would be a obstcule of sending people to the mars rather than sending to the Moon. In spite of being these kind of problems which are logical and reasonable in the lecturer's mind, she states that they can overcome to these blocks and limitations by hydroponis techniqe. By this techniqe, astronauts can raise plants by utilizing just water which can provide them oxygen, at time, recycling the waste water, and provide clean water.
Furthermore, on the basis of previous trips into the space, some scientists expect that it would harm the astronauts less than some other scientists are expecting, and they can also slow down this process by taking more vitamins and calcium. that's how the lecturer rejects the second problem explained by the writer.
Finally, according to the passage, astronausts are in the hazardous situations because of space radiations revealing by the sun. The speaker notices that it isn't in the dangerous level. she states that they can equipped the spacecrafts by small equipment which wouldn't add weight to the ships. Although, the writer believes that it is impossible because constructing a shield would add too much weight to the ships.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...t possibility of sending humans to mars in future. The author mentions that some problems...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can make this exceptional event unlikely to occure. To contrary, the speaker oppo...
^^
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...sources such as food, water and oxygen. it is pointed out that this would be a obs...
^^
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n. it is pointed out that this would be a obstcule of sending people to the mars ...
^
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... sending to the Moon. In spite of being these kind of problems which are logical and reaso...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thats
...ss by taking more vitamins and calcium. thats how the lecturer rejects the second pro...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ss by taking more vitamins and calcium. thats how the lecturer rejects the second pro...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...by the sun. The speaker notices that it isnt in the dangerous level. she states that...
^^^^
Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...es that it isnt in the dangerous level. she states that they can equipped the space...
^^^
Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'equip'
Suggestion: equip
...ngerous level. she states that they can equipped the spacecrafts by small equipment whic...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 262, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...he spacecrafts by small equipment which wouldnt add weight to the ships. Although, the ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, second, so, kind of, such as, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1373.03311258 105% => OK
No of words: 280.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16428571429 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62550043821 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567857142857 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 419.366225166 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8344037019 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.230769231 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 21.698381199 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06452816374 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.3589403974 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.