(W1_V2/2) Sea otters are a small mammal that lives in the waters along North America's west coast from California to Alaska.
The reading states that the population of small mammals, which live in the western coast of North America form California to Alaska, are decline because of the pollution and predators problems and provides 3 reasons of support. The professor says that the major reasons of the decease are not relate with pollution troubles and refutes each of the author’s reason.
First, the reading claims that the pollution such as oil rigs and other sources from the industries as a result the numerous small mammals are dead. The professor refutes this point by saying that the main reasons cause not from the pollution because no animal dead on the shore, however, the cause of dead is predators theory .
Second, the article posits that whales which eat all sea otters are the predator, however, the professor states that whales were killed by humans, so they eat not all tiny mammals, but the main predator is orca which change habit to eat small preys.
Third, the reading says that some areas of shore have few sea otters, but another areas have a lot of small mammals because of the pollution problems. The professor opposes this point by explaining that some areas are shallow, so the orcas cannot access in this area. On the other hand, the predators can access when some areas are deep.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'related'.
Suggestion: related
...he major reasons of the decease are not relate with pollution troubles and refutes eac...
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...r, the cause of dead is predators theory . Second, the article posits that whal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, third, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1373.03311258 78% => OK
No of words: 221.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85972850679 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2336711002 2.5805825403 87% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 145.348785872 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515837104072 0.540411800872 95% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 419.366225166 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4449263017 49.2860985944 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.25 110.228320801 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.625 21.698381199 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.06452816374 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169822381188 0.272083759551 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691070468527 0.0996497079465 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809436909505 0.0662205650399 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093765882581 0.162205337803 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476918016169 0.0443174109184 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.8541721854 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 63.6247240618 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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