Ways to prevent birds' injuries because of glass window

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Ways to prevent birds' injuries because of glass window

The article and the lecture are both about the solutions to prevents birds from flying through glass windows. The author of the reading proposes three solutions to prevent these injuries. Nevertheless, the lecturer refutes the statements made by the author. He is of the opinion that none of the resolutions are effective.

First of all, the author suggests to change regular glass to one way glass, which allows people inside the building to see through but the outside people and birds. This is challenged by the speaker. He says that the problem with one way glass is its outside surface reflects like a mirror, which is bad for birds as well. As they do not understand mirrors, they would consider the image reflected as real and still get hurt. The lecturer mentions the instance that if birds see sky and trees in the mirror, they would regard them as real and fly right into them

Second, the writer puts forth the idea of painting color lines or stripes on the glass so that the birds could see and avoid the window. However, the speaker rebuts this point by asserting that while these patterns are apparent to the birds, they would think of the transparent glass as open holes and try to fly through them. As a result, people have to make these unpainted fields extremely small, which would make the rooms the building inside too dark.

Finally, it is stated in the passage that a man-made magnetic field should be established to steer birds' flight direction. The lecturer, on the other hand, posits that this method would not work well since birds only use magnet indicators to navigate when travelling long distance, for example, migrating from cold countries to hot ones before winter. He elaborates on this by mention that for short-distance flight such as from one side of the city to the other, they would only use their eyes and the brightness of light. Consequently, this effort would not be very much effective.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, well, while, for example, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1373.03311258 117% => OK
No of words: 334.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81736526946 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39088119387 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 145.348785872 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562874251497 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1425786683 49.2860985944 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.266666667 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 21.698381199 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06452816374 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170061155898 0.272083759551 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518041323308 0.0996497079465 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618364789626 0.0662205650399 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102620951268 0.162205337803 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407974572686 0.0443174109184 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.3589403974 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 53.8541721854 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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