Whether's Chevalier memoir were true or not
The article states that many critics argue that Chevalier invented some of the memoirs to make his life more exciting and provides three reasons for support. However, the professor explains that all the memoirs were accurate and reliable and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading states that critics argue that Chevalier was a rich man because he had to borrow money from a Swiss merchant. The professor refutes this point by stating that Chevalier spends money on parties and gambling, and he had to wait for the money he had won, but this did not mean that he was a poor man.
Second, the article claims that Chevalier did not write many of the conversations between him and Voltaire even they had met and conversed because the conversations were written after they occurred. However, the professor contends that the conversations were made by Chevalier because each night after the conversations Chevalier wrote what he remembers from each conversation, also the professor mentions that witnesses confirm that Chevalier wrote notes after the conversations with Voltaire.
Finally, the reading states that Chevalier escaped from prison because he had a few friends that helped him to escaped from jail. The lecture avers that by saying that Chevalier was not helped for his politically well-connected friends. There were other prisoners in the jail that had well-connected friends and were not bribe. The professor mentions that after Chevalier escaped the jailers had to repair the ceiling of the jail where Chevalier was, so that confirm that indeed he escaped through the ceiling with a piece of metal. As he said he did.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...y critics argue that Chevalier invented some of the memoirs to make his life more exciting ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...refutes each of the authors reasons. First, the reading states that critics a...
^^
Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ersations were made by Chevalier because each night after the conversations Cheva...
^^
Line 7, column 322, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bribed'.
Suggestion: bribed
...had well-connected friends and were not bribe. The professor mentions that after Chev...
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Line 7, column 534, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ough the ceiling with a piece of metal. As he said he did.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 12.0772626932 166% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 22.412803532 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 270.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12962962963 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63244762935 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 145.348785872 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462962962963 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 419.366225166 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.224750745 49.2860985944 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.909090909 110.228320801 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 21.698381199 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.06452816374 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18083413888 0.272083759551 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796865141758 0.0996497079465 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427920203281 0.0662205650399 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119762850647 0.162205337803 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445364730706 0.0443174109184 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 63.6247240618 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.7273730684 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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