ZTPO 42
The reading text and lecture are both about the grave dating found in the 13 meter long ship is belong to the King to the King Raedwald rather than the East Anglian king. Lecturer believe that this jewlry is belong to the other king rather than the King Raedwald.
Firstly, The author argues that, archeologist suggest that the these coin found from this ship was 620s old. Additionally, he suggests that historian is evident that this king was died in 624. So, this gold is belonging to him. On the other hand, lecturer stance that, another evident despite of the author present is showing that, this king was died 25 year earlier that author says. moreover, there is also probability of uncertainty in dating of this artifacts.
Secondly, reading passage said that, this kind of great amount of gold is belonging to that king, which was powerful in this time. Writer also said that, King Raedwald was the only very powerful king during that time. In contrast, lecturer is opposing this, and saud that lot attacker are coming from the various area. So, there is possibility of theft of the older gold reserve of other king, which far bigger that the King Raedwald.
In the end, The Reading text showing that, at te time digging of this grave the worker found two spoon with imprints od the "Sauls" and "Pauls" , which was the christians. Who converts the king religions into the Christianity. Historial showing up that this king was a christians. on the other end, lecturer believe that this spoon was gifted to the king by this two christians.
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Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and belong
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and belong
Sentence: Firstly, The author argues that, archeologist suggest that the these coin found from this ship was 620s old.
Description: The fragment archeologist suggest that is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace suggest with verb, past tense
Sentence: On the other hand, lecturer stance that, another evident despite of the author present is showing that, this king was died 25 year earlier that author says. moreover, there is also probability of uncertainty in dating of this artifacts.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and artifacts
Sentence: In contrast, lecturer is opposing this, and saud that lot attacker are coming from the various area.
Description: The fragment that lot attacker is not usually followed by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
Sentence: In the end, The Reading text showing that, at te time digging of this grave the worker found two spoon with imprints od the 'Sauls' and 'Pauls' , which was the christians.
Description: A nil is not usually followed by an article
Suggestion: Refer to od and the
Description: The word and is not usually used as a nil
Suggestion: Refer to and
Sentence: Historial showing up that this king was a christians. on the other end, lecturer believe that this spoon was gifted to the king by this two christians.
Description: The token a is not usually followed by a noun, plural, proper
Suggestion: Refer to a and christians
Description: The fragment lecturer believe that is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace believe with verb, past tense
Sentence: Lecturer believe that this jewlry is belong to the other king rather than the King Raedwald.
Error: jewlry Suggestion: jewelry
Sentence: In contrast, lecturer is opposing this, and saud that lot attacker are coming from the various area.
Error: saud Suggestion: said
Sentence: In the end, The Reading text showing that, at te time digging of this grave the worker found two spoon with imprints od the 'Sauls' and 'Pauls' , which was the christians.
Error: od Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: te Suggestion: No alternate word
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 19 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 13 12
No. of Words: 269 250
No. of Characters: 1234 1200
No. of Different Words: 127 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.05 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.587 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.211 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 74 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 55 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.692 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.227 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.538 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.403 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.609 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.119 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4