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Nowadays online shopping becomes more popular than in-store shopping. Is it a positive or a negative development? Give your reasons and examples.
With the advanced technology development, the form of shopping also has changed significantly. There are those who argue that it is advantageous for shopping online via computers or laptops to be linked to the Internet. Meanwhile, others argue that shopping online also has negative aspects compared to in –store shopping. To my mind, shopping online has both advantages and disadvantages in modern society.
First of all, shopping online has been considered as the best way of being time-saving and right price. It is true that more and more white collars workers as well as blue collar workers ...
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With the advanced technology development,
With the development of advanced technology ,
and different producers for them same products.
and different producers for the same products.
It can be said that due to not going to supermarkets to have a look goods, buyers are fell into being cheated the quality of products that they buy.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
when purchasers buy something online.
when it purchasers buy something online.
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