In this modern society, shopping is a form of entertainment. Some people believe that online shopping is most popular than online face to face shopping, while some clique opposed to this. Both the positive and negative perspective along with my opinion will be justified in the forthcoming subsections.
In this paragraph, I will throw light on the former notion. First and foremost is that online shopping is more convenient and efficient for those who have no time for store shopping due to their work. Another one is people can do comparison in price, quality, they have many choices at one platform, it saves their time, and they can get good discounts. Moreover, in online shopping mankind purchase everything with cheap rate as well as branded product, online stores update customer's reviews, so do not need to go for others reviews at door to door shopping. For example, Amazon, Flipkart both are famous for online stores at there we can buy grocery for kitchen, electrical items, clothes etc.
On the other hand, I would not overlook the other side, too. To begin with, in store shopping person meet to others, and obtain knowledge or share each others experience for same products. For those who are shopoholic for them online shopping is not appropriate, However, in door to door shopping they can enjoy with their friends and family and for them it is adventures. Apart from this, they can keep their eye on product and their is no chance to purchase default product so there is lace issues to exchange products.
Thus, wrap up the discussion, with reference to everything discussed in above mention paragraphs. In my point of view I will strongly believe that online shopping and store shopping both has positive and negative development for society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...experience for same products. For those who are shopoholic for them online shopping is ...
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Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... they can keep their eye on product and their is no chance to purchase default produc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, while, apart from, for example, as well as, to begin with, with reference to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96621621622 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57530838821 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570945945946 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6102411758 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248717161807 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919537459244 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954367390871 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179025425022 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578568326773 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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