In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve these problems?
There is a wide concern in some countries that the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are deteriorating. There are several causes of these problems which shall be discussed in this essay with the effective measures to tackle them.
One of the main reasons of these problems is the latest technology by itself. Due to the advancement in technology, the lifestyle of people has significantly changed and started to live sedentary lifestyle. For example, many basic jobs which require physical movement are being done by machine or robot and the jobs of peo...
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