Some people argue that fashion items cost too much money. Others say that this is acceptable because fashion is an important part of life. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
The Issue regarding the growing popularity of fashion among general people has divisive effect in the society. Although keeping up with fashion cannot be ignored completely in this era, I believe the cost that it demands is not worthwhile.
On the one hand, proponents of the designer labels put forth their arguments based on the impact outer appearance of a person tend to have in modern life. Firstly, if one is well dressed,it is found to be comparatively much easier to have a better impression in social contacts, either it be social gatherings or workplace. Secondly, designer apparels and a...
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not only the economical gap in the society is accrued but also the march of mankind to depletion of natural resources proceed in an expedited rate.
Description: Not only...but also is not used properly. can you re-write this sentence?
may seem to be necessary evil
may seem to be necessarily evil //evil as adj.
may seem to be a necessary evil //evil as noun
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