In real life, the most practical advice for leaders is not to treat pawns like pawns, nor princes like princes, but all persons like persons.
In the issue statement the author have to sugesst that the leaders must have treat the all type of people as people.
But it is not possible in all the field leader as example we take the leader of the doctor team suppose called dean if the dean of the hospital behave life friendly to all the membres of the hosptial staff not ask any single word about thier work and not shout about their mistake . Then all envoirment become freely and it may possible that some of staff member take the advantegous of this thing. Like tkae holiday without intimeation,lazy in their work. This amy happend that the reputation of the hosptial goes down gradually. So that Leader must have do their duty as strict asv possible, So that all people must follow the rule .
If we consider the leader the leader in the film indutry then it may be possible that,author statement wokable . If the we have produce good entertianed film then team lead must be behave all the actor,coactor ,all backgrounf coordinator as the as same level. Alway have behave like friendly . All work must tell in politely to staff. expalin with very good manner. have to Understand all staff problem.Some time try to slove that problem in very geniual manner . So the effict of zll this that all staff give their all effort to make the film succesful.
But finally,this not possible in all field of leader as I explain i the two above passge
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2013-03-24 | deepali123 | 30 | view |
| 2013-01-22 | igniter56 | 55 | view |
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should take out student loans to avoid working while studying. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 36
- In real life, the most practical advice for leaders is not to treat pawns like pawns, nor princes like princes, but all persons like persons. 30
- The staff welfare manager of Human resources at Bizware Software Industires give recommenadtion to his company president that comapny have to use hidden camera to monitor their empolyees so that we can we can reduce the number of hour of empolyess spe 50
- 1." The following the memo is from the business of Edesia Food Store. The japanese store Genki Desu makes huge profit. The storekeepers release stimulating scents early in the day to invigorate shopper and release soothing scents later in the day. there 60
- The best way for a society to prepare people for leadership in government industry or the field is by instilling in them sense of cooperation not compeition 40
Sentence: In the issue statement the author have to sugesst that the leaders must have treat the all type of people as people.
Description: The token the is not usually followed by a determiner/pronoun, pre-quantifier
Suggestion: Refer to the and all
Sentence: Then all envoirment become freely and it may possible that some of staff member take the advantegous of this thing.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to may and possible
Description: The fragment member take the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace take with verb, past tense
Sentence: So that Leader must have do their duty as strict asv possible, So that all people must follow the rule .
Description: A verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or is not usually followed by a verb 'to do', uninflected present tense, infinitive or
Suggestion: Refer to have and do
Sentence: If the we have produce good entertianed film then team lead must be behave all the actor,coactor ,all backgrounf coordinator as the as same level.
Description: A verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to have and produce
Sentence: In the issue statement the author have to sugesst that the leaders must have treat the all type of people as people.
Error: sugesst Suggestion: suggest
Sentence: But it is not possible in all the field leader as example we take the leader of the doctor team suppose called dean if the dean of the hospital behave life friendly to all the membres of the hosptial staff not ask any single word about thier work and not shout about their mistake .
Error: membres Suggestion: members
Error: hosptial Suggestion: hospital
Error: thier Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Then all envoirment become freely and it may possible that some of staff member take the advantegous of this thing.
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: envoirment Suggestion: enjoyment
Error: advantegous Suggestion: advantageous
Sentence: Like tkae holiday without intimeation,lazy in their work.
Error: tkae Suggestion: take
Error: intimeation Suggestion: intimation
Sentence: This amy happend that the reputation of the hosptial goes down gradually.
Error: amy Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: hosptial Suggestion: hospital
Error: happend Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: So that Leader must have do their duty as strict asv possible, So that all people must follow the rule .
Error: asv Suggestion: as
Sentence: If we consider the leader the leader in the film indutry then it may be possible that,author statement wokable .
Error: indutry Suggestion: industry
Error: wokable Suggestion: workable
Sentence: If the we have produce good entertianed film then team lead must be behave all the actor,coactor ,all backgrounf coordinator as the as same level.
Error: entertianed Suggestion: entertained
Error: backgrounf Suggestion: background
Error: coactor Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Alway have behave like friendly .
Error: Alway Suggestion: Always
Sentence: All work must tell in politely to staff. expalin with very good manner. have to Understand all staff problem.Some time try to slove that problem in very geniual manner .
Error: geniual Suggestion: genial
Error: slove Suggestion: slave
Error: expalin Suggestion: explain
Sentence: So the effict of zll this that all staff give their all effort to make the film succesful.
Error: effict Suggestion: effect
Error: succesful Suggestion: successful
Error: zll Suggestion: all
Sentence: But finally,this not possible in all field of leader as I explain i the two above passge
Error: passge Suggestion: passage
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 24 2
No. of Words: 254 350
No. of Different Words: 129 200
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 24 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 254 350
No. of Characters: 1123 1500
No. of Different Words: 129 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.992 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.421 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.115 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 70 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 24 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.894 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.583 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.382 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.57 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.129 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5