In some countries, people are no longer allowed to smoke in many public places and office buildings. Do you think this is a good rule or a bad rule? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
Smoking, nowadays, is one of the crucial issues we are dealing with. Due to misleading advertisements and common use of cigarette in movies and TV shows, many people, especially teenagers, trend to smoking. As my vantage point, drastic measures must be taken to stop smoking. I agree with the idea to ban smoking in public places and office buildings. In what follows, I will delineate my reasons.
To begin with, banning smoke in public places will discourage people from smoking. When smokers enter a public place and see that no one else is smoking, they, unconsciously, will be persuaded to st...
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Due to misleading advertisements
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