some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing number of sports facilities.Others, however say that would help a little effect on public and other measures are required.
discuss the both of these views and give your opinion.
Games are key to stay healthy and facilitation of the sports can be beneficial to develop the health of people. However, other steps are also necessary for public health.
Primarily, government and other health authorities should provide the basic elements of human such as quility food. For example, as per the survey of world health organization ten million people sleep without having dinner in India only. Their first priority is food not sports services. Moreover, due to impure water people are facing lethal diseases such as cancer,sugar and dental, vision, hearing problems as well Hence pure water is yet a issue in many parts of the world.
In addition that, in some countries medical facilities are not up to the mark and demanding the intension of administration. In developing nations such as india pakistan a big Proportion of population do not relay upon government hospitals they prefer private clinics where the are being looted by financially major reason of that People are still waiting for kind behaviour of hospital staff and the discipline of doctor in public funded hospitals.
Furthermore, either there is lack of awareness in people about a notable number of diseases or they feel insult while talking about them as an aftermath increase in the cases of sexual transmitted diseases such as AIDS, therefore government should give stress on awareness programs to keep people healthy.
On the other hand, people who already have better facilities of living should be encouraged to participate in games as a result,people can stay healthy and there are rare chances of obesity in a sportsman.
Finally, however, undoubtedly, sports have a lot of advantages for the health standard of people but government should work for the betterment of basic and essential needs of the people which helps them to stay fit . Games keep the stability in the health standard of people.
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- some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing number of sports facilities.Others, however say that would help a little effect on public and other measures are required.discuss the both of these views and give your opinion. 70
a issue in many parts of the world.
an issue in many parts of the world.
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Sentence: In addition that, in some countries medical facilities are not up to the mark and demanding the intension of administration.
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