In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?
In today’s world, graduates in many countries have a hard time to get a job. This phenomenon becomes an interesting issue that need to be concerned. The causes and some solutions behind this situation will be discussed carefully.
To begin with, there are several possible causes of unemployed in new graduates. First and foremost, in certain lines such as art and media, the number of new graduates is very high which is not balanced with the demand of labor market. Consequently, high qualified students from these fields could get in the job market only half of them or less than that. Seco...
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Sentence: In conclusion, the causes of lacking jobs for high graduates contribute to imbalanced the number of graduates and job demands and graduates are unsatisfied in a recruitment process by employers.
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the university can produce suitable majors for individuals and students will have a better prepare for accessing employment opportunities in the future.
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