The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the UK.
The line graph elucidates the percentage of cinema visited by British people and classifies these viewers in four age groups (14-24, 24-34, 34-44 and 44-54) from 1990 to 2010
During the first phrase of the graph, the highest attendance was people with 44 to 54 of age (nearly 40%) and the next highest attendance rate was 34 to 44 aged people at around 38%. While there was about 22% for UK citizens visited the theater in 1990 for those aged 24 to 34, about 25% of UK teenagers entered in. UK people with 24 to 34 of their age have increased number of visits to the cinema in the next five years to reach at nearly 28%, which trend is similar for those who are over 44 years old (at 40%). In contrast, the rest of age groups showed remained fairly unchanged within those periods. Even though, there was some decline in the number of visits to the movie theater in 2000, it picked up its trend until the end of the projected periods.
It is apparent that, regardless with the times, the highest visit was made by the oldest age groups of 44 to 54.
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While there was about 22% for UK citizens visited the theater in 1990
While there was about 22% for UK citizens who visited the theater in 1990
flaws:
need to talk more about the differences in different years. for example, it is not clear from 200-2010. You can't simply say: 'it picked up its trend until the end of the projected periods. '
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