The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar charts elucidate the information about European people who are from UK, France, Italy and Germany, spending habits on six products.
British people spent the most amount of money on six consumer goods compared to other countries in overall. UK residents’ expenditure was mostly on photographic film (more than 170 thousand pounds), which is similar for French people (nearly 170 thousand pounds). This figure is followed closely by toys (nearly 170 thousand pounds) for British people whereas the expenditure on toys and CDs (of around 158 thousand pounds) made by people from France. The least spending was Tennis racquets for citizens from both countries of about 155 thousand pounds and 145 thousand pounds for UK and French, respectively.
Below 160 thousand pounds sterling were used by residents from Italy and Germany. The highest spending for Italy was 158 thousand pounds for Toys and for Germany was 150 thousand pounds for Tennis racquet. The lowest spending was personal stereos and photographic film for Italian and German for 150 thousand and 145 thousand pounds, respectively.
It is evident from the graph that, UK people spent the most money on six consumer goods whereas Germany spent the least money. Most of European residents bought Toys and photographic film and they spent the least on tennis racquets.
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The bar charts elucidate the information about European people who are from UK, France, Italy and Germany, spending habits on six products.
The bar charts elucidate the information of spending habits about European people who are from UK, France, Italy and Germany on six products.
whereas the expenditure on toys and CDs (of around 158 thousand pounds) made by people from France.
whereas the expenditure on toys and CDs (of around 158 thousand pounds) is made by people from France.
and for Germany was 150 thousand pounds
and for Germany it was 150 thousand pounds
Sentence: The highest spending for Italy was 158 thousand pounds for Toys and for Germany was 150 thousand pounds for Tennis racquet.
Error: racquet Suggestion: racket
flaws:
it is wrong for the conclusion:
and they spent the least on tennis racquets.
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