The diagram below shows an automatic photobooth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is a diagram providing some illustrations concerned about the automatic photo booth and items those are included in it.
According to the visuals noteworthy is the fact that all of the main phases are done by the automatic computer whereas the simple activities are done with the help of individuals.
Regarding the particular diagram the photo making process launches when the individual sits on the adjustable stool looking at the special point in order to be taken eye level, the person has to be ready to pull the rope waiting for some three seconds. In the initial stages the coin must be put in and the size (format) of the photo has to be taken into account as well as the colour ( the colour may be black or white).
In summary, the individual in booth must close the special black curtain and make him appropriate order by looking mirror in the booth before he is taken a photo. The particular process ends with delivering of the photo within a minute.
- The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
- The diagram below gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies from 1920 to 2000 70
- The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 80
- Some people believe that electronic calculators should not be allowed in school until after the pupils have mastered mental arithmetic. Others believe that calculators save pupils time especially with complicated calculations.Discuss both these views and 70
- The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...the visuals noteworthy is the fact that all of the main phases are done by the automatic c...
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Line 4, column 385, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis
Suggestion: (
...aken into account as well as the colour ( the colour may be black or white). In s...
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Discourse Markers used:
['look', 'may', 'regarding', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'whereas', 'as to', 'in summary', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224043715847 0.268076937826 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.185792349727 0.116061578633 160% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0983606557377 0.0759168565197 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0109289617486 0.0366838410393 30% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.016393442623 0.0131127313244 125% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136612021858 0.155750635184 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0874316939891 0.0379272487307 231% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.50917057869 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0273224043716 0.0210936926555 130% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.180327868852 0.0948980150116 190% => Less determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.016393442623 0.00437022459523 375% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00546448087432 0.00967000014798 57% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 969.0 1161.00487805 83% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.9 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63372093023 5.90752243213 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.296511627907 0.337110787985 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.226744186047 0.247514529752 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.133720930233 0.171178102325 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0988372093023 0.112407865282 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50917057869 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575581395349 0.546246751206 105% => OK
Word variations: 50.4987418028 49.3433353143 102% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 8.93414634146 67% => OK
Sentence length: 28.6666666667 23.0094962315 125% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2936971992 42.9750493124 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.5 135.714022679 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 23.0094962315 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 0.689975730869 242% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 51.3410852713 47.7609492067 107% => OK
Elegance: 2.10256410256 2.94281807926 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391902469743 0.418131533498 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.239577898002 0.181151798455 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0941569071927 0.0850326197045 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.860187978937 0.706616315825 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149075291068 0.157042692854 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.240836276397 0.228904883108 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487719591451 0.108899403657 45% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.376325390434 0.367819155151 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.139985926859 0.0812612215331 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270178026078 0.316326947829 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543599843999 0.0921553760075 59% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 3.0 7.1512195122 42% => More topic words wanted.
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.5 Out of 9