Your friend has asked to recommend a music teacher for his child. Write a letter giving details.
1. How you know about the teacher
2. Why you recommend
3. Tell how further information can be obtained about lessons.
Dear Prathap,
How are you and your family? It has been so long since I have written and I also got your letter enquiring about a local music teacher for your daughter. Fortunate for you that I know a reputed musician who is willing to teach your daughter.
I and this musician named John were good friends from our childhood days. Since he is in music field, I asked him to suggest a good tutor for you; however, to my surprise, he was willing to train your daughter as a token of friendship.
I would recommend you strongly to accept this offer because he is one of the top musicians in Chennai city. Moreover, he won several awards for his compositions in movies. So, I believe, it cannot get better than this.
In addition, I would also suggest you to subscribe to musical lessons from "www.music.com" website which would provide you with basics of the instruments and sounds. It costs around 50 dollars and you will receive 50 hours of practice lessons.
Anyway, thanks for asking my suggestions. But please do write back immediately about your decision, so that I could keep John informed.
Best Wishes,
Raj S
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...daughter as a token of friendship. I would recommend you strongly to accept...
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...e, it cannot get better than this. In addition, I would also suggest you to...
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...eive 50 hours of practice lessons. Anyway, thanks for asking my suggestions...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'anyway', 'but', 'however', 'moreover', 'so', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.213973799127 0.220444632235 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.144104803493 0.167888034529 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.056768558952 0.0606518309736 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0436681222707 0.0506257000042 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.148471615721 0.118615021944 125% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117903930131 0.107062808482 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0218340611354 0.041066498444 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89430515784 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0305676855895 0.0385302599488 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0393013100437 0.0714148451538 55% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0262008733624 0.0191574576366 137% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00873362445415 0.00930345855455 94% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1231.0 1141.60824742 108% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.134020619 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.21717171717 5.53046319177 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78085437643 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.308080808081 0.284621296913 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252525252525 0.211203875043 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.141414141414 0.133321485273 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0959595959596 0.0843313296314 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89430515784 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661616161616 0.622163163488 106% => OK
Word variations: 70.3132898082 62.8969750728 112% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 12.9587628866 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.2307692308 16.4300151701 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6116536187 44.7399317507 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6923076923 90.9928171075 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 16.4300151701 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.538461538462 0.613754768223 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 7.22680412371 111% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 40.4832944833 37.5504026743 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.05194805195 1.13073093955 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277752494055 0.331212695627 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0678257432413 0.0927372745006 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0705155114802 0.0736520305886 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.66339258738 0.662452444078 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.216878828579 0.233577193048 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869737501678 0.122183219658 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637375310232 0.0765303033291 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.0843907148468 0.110270004696 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.1005330232 0.120535355502 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910659391537 0.120397337282 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889817743245 0.113578534861 78% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.54639175258 110% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.0824742268 92% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.62886597938 114% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.25773195876 109% => OK
similarity_between_topicWord_text: 0.0426111085698 0.111571556231 38% => OK
topic_distributions: 0.0098394907114 0.00990389857869 99% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.5 Out of 9