Some organization believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
One of the important aspects in organization is about how their member should dress. Some of them argue that their fellows should care about their fashion style, while others think that quality of work is matter more than others. This essay aims to explore more about these opinions followed by my opinion.
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while others think that quality of work is matter more than others.
while others think that the quality of work matters more than others.
because their appearance play an important role toward public opinion.
because their appearance plays an important role toward public opinion.
The one who make direct contact with people,
The one who makes direct contact with people,
Sentence: They assume that appearance takes a lot of people time and distract their focus on work, because they will spend a lot of time to choose their dress and make their fashion style as the priority more than their jobs.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to people and time
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