Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, with the rapid development of the technology, it has become an important part of the human's life. Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient, but other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. I, on the other hand, think that computers have made life more simple and convenient because it helps people communicate, get information and do research.
Firstly, computers have made life easily done and more convenient is preferable, as a result, you can communicate with other people with no trouble, especially for many people who live far from their family. For example, my uncle has lived and worked in America for 15 years, but my grandmother and my family are living in Vietnam so that it is very difficult to contact without using computers. Furthermore, it is extremely helpful when you have to face up to an emergency situation. For instance, a few days ago, I need to bring my research for my literature class and I had left if at home. So I was totally worried because it is the deadline of the research. If I did not hand in the paper, I would have gotten a worse score. Then in this case, I had to call my father to bring it to me. Thus, it is highly convenient for many people.
Secondly, the computers provide many pieces of information, you can use the computer to get information and broaden your knowledge. You can read the news and listen to the radio on the computer. Thus, it can help you to update your information.
Finally, the computers are extremely useful when you need to do research. You can find the information on the internet then you can type your research on the computer. It can help you save the research easily. When you have done the research, you can print them out neatly. Therefore, you can do your works easily, no matter it what it is, even audio or video data.
In conclusion, I think that computers have made life easier and more beneficial for the reason as communication, information and research.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
... it has become an important part of the humans life. Some people say that computers ha...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.200992555831 0.229887763892 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.168734491315 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0570719602978 0.0866891130778 66% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0694789081886 0.046263068375 150% => OK
Pronouns: 0.109181141439 0.0685040099705 159% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0967741935484 0.118717715034 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0347394540943 0.0351676179071 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6921826924 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0272952853598 0.0309702414327 88% => OK
Particles: 0.00496277915633 0.00188951952338 263% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0694789081886 0.0887237588012 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0248138957816 0.0209618222197 118% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0124069478908 0.0139019557991 89% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2011.0 2387.08602151 84% => OK
No of words: 355.0 408.028673835 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66478873239 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.29014084507 0.338922669872 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.216901408451 0.251872472559 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166197183099 0.174417080927 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138028169014 0.112833075102 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6921826924 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495774647887 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 52.0258024464 59.2087087015 88% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.75 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8073445092 48.84282405 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.55 120.699889404 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.95 0.644075263715 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 39.4401408451 45.7405998639 86% => OK
Elegance: 0.957142857143 1.45489161554 66% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369633748981 0.300154397459 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.137169211956 0.103427244359 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.126067110168 0.0752933317313 167% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.553925770634 0.497263757937 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.192142183572 0.151897553556 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137785716976 0.114077575197 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179777583526 0.0781384742642 230% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.291574028966 0.336927656856 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.14639506609 0.067059652881 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267059412206 0.210909579961 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179846895873 0.0618886996521 291% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
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Rates: 86 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26 Out of 30
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