TP0 40 - Integrated
In the lecture, the professor makes several points as to why set up a permanent station on Venus’ atmosphere may be possible. In fact, the professor’s lecture casts doubt on the reading through a number of points elaborated as follows.
The first point that professor mentions to refute the reading is that the atmosphere on the Venus is 90 times greater than the pressure at Earth’s surface which is not true. According to the professor, the atmosphere pressure on Venus is much lower than the surface. So the pressure is equal the Earth’s pressure and it is apt for human life. Hence, this point proves the main idea of the reading wrong.
Another important point that the professor points out to the undermine the validity of the reading is that Venus’ surface made up carbon dioxide, nitrogen and sulfuric acid and also there is no source of water and oxygen for human life which is not true. As is pointed out by the professor, water and oxygen can produce by chemical processes out of these compounds. So it can easily acquire from Venus’s atmosphere. Thereby, this point made in the lecture also renders the main idea of the reading invalid.
Finally, the last point that the professor brought up, which runs counter to the reading is that, 60% of sunlight is reflected back into space by thick of clouds which is not true. As a matter of fact, the professor asserts that, this clouds are not very thick and also solar power collect both the direct sunlight filtering from above and the sunlight reflected by clouds below. hence, this point is in contrast the main idea of the reading.
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why set up a permanent station on Venus’ atmosphere may be possible.
why setting up a permanent station on Venus’ atmosphere may be possible.
the atmosphere pressure on Venus is much lower than the surface.
the atmosphere pressure on Venus is much lower on the surface. ???
So the pressure is equal the Earth’s pressure
So the pressure is equal to the Earth’s pressure
water and oxygen can produce by
water and oxygen can be produced by
Sentence: As a matter of fact, the professor asserts that, this clouds are not very thick and also solar power collect both the direct sunlight filtering from above and the sunlight reflected by clouds below. hence, this point is in contrast the main idea of the reading.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and clouds
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 12
No. of Words: 279 250
No. of Characters: 1282 1200
No. of Different Words: 127 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.087 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.595 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.296 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 86 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.125 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.422 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.625 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.13 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... point that the professor points out to the undermine the validity of the reading is that Ven...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 381, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...the sunlight reflected by clouds below. hence, this point is in contrast the main ide...
^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'as to', 'in contrast', 'in fact', 'as a matter of fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.274509803922 0.261695866417 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.124183006536 0.158904122519 78% => OK
Adjectives: 0.078431372549 0.0723426182421 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0457516339869 0.0435111971325 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00653594771242 0.0277247811725 24% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.150326797386 0.128828473217 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0228758169935 0.0370669169778 62% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43291302515 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.016339869281 0.0208969081088 78% => OK
Particles: 0.016339869281 0.00154638098197 1057% => OK
Determiners: 0.140522875817 0.128158765124 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00980392156863 0.0158828679856 62% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0196078431373 0.0114777025283 171% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1610.0 1645.83664459 98% => OK
No of words: 279.0 271.125827815 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.770609319 6.08160592843 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.04852973271 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329749103943 0.374372842146 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258064516129 0.287516216867 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.175627240143 0.187439937562 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0931899641577 0.113142543107 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43291302515 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47311827957 0.539623497131 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.1276256426 53.8517498576 84% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0529801325 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.4615384615 21.7502111507 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.889839701 49.3711431718 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.846153846 132.220823453 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 21.7502111507 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.846153846154 0.878197800319 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.39072847682 59% => OK
Readability: 47.2679900744 50.5018328374 94% => OK
Elegance: 2.53703703704 1.90840788429 133% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.549887131256 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.197509628147 0.142949733639 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.131135043695 0.0787303798458 167% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.663239511124 0.631733273073 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.186278815424 0.139662658121 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.266732575781 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.103435571967 0% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.492577954655 0.414875509568 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.100506395221 0.0530846634433 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.40443939384 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0528353158467 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.26048565121 94% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.49668874172 29% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.62251655629 138% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.1766004415 126% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.2958057395 97% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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