Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. Use
specific reasons and examples to support your answer
The argument above asserts that teachers have better social standing in the past than today. A simple recognition of the argument lends our discussion to a very crucial question of why should respect to teachers and value this job in our society? Although it is broadly based argument which cannot summed up in a word or so, we need look no further than the fact that teachers play a vital role in every society in the world. That having been mentioned, I however adhere to this belief that teachers were more appreciated in the past than were nowadays for the reasons will be illustrated at length in following paragraphs.
First and foremost, the crux of the matter lies in the fact that, being a teacher or university professor gives you a highly social standing in the world and specially the society were you live. In better words, this job is very important and it considers the one of the best job in the world. Teachers have undeniable effect on our lives. We cannot overlook the role of teachers in human lives. We know that teachers are not infallible but being a university professor would pave the way for teachers to establish a cordial rapport with students and pass their knowledge down to student. Always teachers feel oblige to do something for their compatriots. Today teachers have low salary and teaching in university has not enough benefits for their lives. For example in our country teachers obtain 10$ for 2 hours teaching which is very low. In the past there were some benefits associated with teaching such as high income, highly social standing and some advantages for teacher’s family. Therefore, owing to this reasons that I put forward, I totally agree with this topic and I believe that government should contrive some ways to increase the teacher’s salaries.
Secondly, nowadays people do not want to be a teacher. The demand for being a teacher or university professor is detracting. Being a university professor not only has low salary even has some trouble and inconvenience. So due to this reason, people prefer to choose other jobs. For the purpose of the illustration, let's take the example of one of my best friends who teaches in university. One week ago he makes a mistake in his class and suddenly one student points out his mistake in class and other students scorn and humiliate their teacher. Consequently, my friend scorn it and discard the class. We should know that teachers are worthy of respect and they are not infallible. As a proverb says “to err is human”, I mean everyone makes mistake including teachers. So If a teacher makes a mistake we should off going quietly about it and correct the mistake after the class in private. Hence, this reasons that I posed can decrease the teacher’s social standing.
To sum up, I totally agree with this topic and I believe that in the past teachers were worthy of respect more than today. Also government and anthropologist should determine and survey the factor of this phenomenon.
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Although it is broadly based argument which cannot summed up in a word
Although it is a broadly based argument which cannot be summed up in a word
Sentence: Therefore, owing to this reasons that I put forward, I totally agree with this topic and I believe that government should contrive some ways to increase the teacher's salaries.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and reasons
Sentence: So If a teacher makes a mistake we should off going quietly about it and correct the mistake after the class in private.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a preposition
Suggestion: Refer to should and off
flaws:
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We are expecting:
No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 27 15
No. of Words: 512 350
No. of Characters: 2419 1500
No. of Different Words: 238 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.757 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.725 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.517 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 173 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 130 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 85 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.963 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.487 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.284 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.419 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.141 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...words, this job is very important and it considers the one of the best job in the...
^^
Line 3, column 591, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...d pass their knowledge down to student. Always teachers feel oblige to do something fo...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 800, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$10'.
Suggestion: $10
... example in our country teachers obtain 10$ for 2 hours teaching which is very low....
^^^
Line 3, column 1012, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...r teacher’s family. Therefore, owing to this reasons that I put forward, I totally a...
^^^^
Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...were worthy of respect more than today. Also government and anthropologist should de...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'i mean', 'such as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236983842011 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.159784560144 0.158761421928 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0700179533214 0.0866891130778 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0592459605027 0.046263068375 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0592459605027 0.0685040099705 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122082585278 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0341113105925 0.0351676179071 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62656828036 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0215439856373 0.0309702414327 70% => OK
Particles: 0.00718132854578 0.00188951952338 380% => OK
Determiners: 0.107719928187 0.0887237588012 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0179533213645 0.0209618222197 86% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00897666068223 0.0139019557991 65% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2998.0 2387.08602151 126% => OK
No of words: 512.0 408.028673835 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85546875 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.359375 0.338922669872 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26171875 0.251872472559 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1796875 0.174417080927 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.09765625 0.112833075102 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62656828036 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470703125 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.7058974114 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6684587814 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.962962963 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1506647375 48.84282405 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.037037037 120.699889404 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.962962963 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.592592592593 0.644075263715 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 45.134837963 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.41290322581 1.45489161554 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390883738409 0.300154397459 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.114084156622 0.103427244359 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0695111059697 0.0752933317313 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.426301678634 0.497263757937 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156605698179 0.151897553556 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129469547771 0.114077575197 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837510166174 0.0781384742642 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.465660142802 0.336927656856 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.102481921418 0.067059652881 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295068021687 0.210909579961 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283584209829 0.0618886996521 46% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.86379928315 285% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 2.4623655914 366% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.6433691756 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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