You recently saw a job advertisement for a tour guide, to show your local area and its attractions to English-speaking tourists. Write a letter to a tourist agency and say
– Where did you see this advertisement?
– Explain why you are suitable for this job.
– Suggest how to improve your local area to attract more tourists.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I write to apply for the position of Tour Guide as advertised by your organization on the 25th of July 2016. Please find enclosed my curriculum vitae and statement of purpose.
My first degree was in Event Management from University of Nigeria, Nsuka and my final year project was on tourism guide with emphasis on tourists from anglophone countries. In the course of executing this project, I explored several tourist locations within and around Oguta. To understand places that will be of interest to these group of people, I studied their traditions and cultures, as well as past tourist locations visited. I realized that they found water and hilly areas quite attractive, as well as areas that tell sound cultural stories about the community and its inhabitants. I therefore summarized that Oguta Lake, the Oranga Hill and the Nnamdi Azikiwe Museum will be off interest to these group of people. Also, I have gone on to garner six years of relevant experience since graduation in 2006.
I have observed that our community does not attract enough visitors and in my opinion we can enhance this situation by cleaning up the water bodies, the waterfronts and the other locations as well. Also, there is the need to paint some of these areas and plant some flowers to make them look more beautiful. However, in making these places more interesting, we need to be careful not to alter the stories they tell as that is the essence of these sites.
With my qualifications and experience, I hope that you will consider me a match for the job and extend an invitation for an interview to me, as I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Okoronkwo Alfred Chinedu.
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| 2019-03-04 | Richa Dhiman | 73 | view |
| 2016-07-14 | okoronkwoac | 90 | view |
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'as well as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260188087774 0.220444632235 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.137931034483 0.167888034529 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0438871473354 0.0606518309736 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0532915360502 0.0506257000042 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0846394984326 0.118615021944 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137931034483 0.107062808482 129% => OK
Participles: 0.0219435736677 0.041066498444 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65355742592 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0344827586207 0.0385302599488 89% => OK
Particles: 0.00313479623824 0.00132118243153 237% => OK
Determiners: 0.0815047021944 0.0714148451538 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.012539184953 0.0191574576366 65% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00626959247649 0.00930345855455 67% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1702.0 1141.60824742 149% => OK
No of words: 291.0 206.134020619 141% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84879725086 5.53046319177 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.78085437643 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.312714776632 0.284621296913 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.250859106529 0.211203875043 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182130584192 0.133321485273 137% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113402061856 0.0843313296314 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65355742592 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 127.690721649 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601374570447 0.622163163488 97% => OK
Word variations: 66.0885819594 62.8969750728 105% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 12.9587628866 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.3846153846 16.4300151701 136% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5968621638 44.7399317507 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.923076923 90.9928171075 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 16.4300151701 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.769230769231 0.613754768223 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 47.4705260375 37.5504026743 126% => OK
Elegance: 1.52272727273 1.13073093955 135% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216330859342 0.331212695627 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.092715088894 0.0927372745006 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0677910622819 0.0736520305886 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.602423151066 0.579516596996 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.205758831567 0.180689518051 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870430287231 0.122183219658 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061324272641 0.0765303033291 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.22804814167 0.211926503985 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.152452671902 0.0737400523855 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131604066218 0.203819188451 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839802834451 0.067151250289 125% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 8.32989690722 120% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 90.2466629303 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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