Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Changing with time is human nature, the whole world adopt itself with the passage of time. some individual believe that they should follow the same routine, while other have view that revolution in life is always a good thing. The following essay will discuss both the views and will try to figure out possible conclusion.
First of all, a large proportion of population in the world is not satisfied from their routines and jobs. Moreover, they want a revolution in their lives, as well as, in their countries. However, this change could be positive or negative. Thus, if a person want to moulds his life in a better way, it should be appreciated. For instance, a person want to cease smoking, gambling or drinking. Being positive changes these must be kept. Similarly, someone going abroad for education and for a change needs to be encouraged.
In contrast, some changes are also negative and have bad impact on life. As a result, it would be better to prevent such alteration. For example, someone is in critical stage of his studies and wants to leave school. In addition to this, start smoking, resigning from a good job and joining a bad company, all are negative changes and are better to be avoided. As every decision has good or bad affects, therefore, one should think over it before taking any decision.
In a nutshell, changes can be either positive or negative. So, in my opinion, an individual must adopt itself to a positive change, while on the other hand, negative change should be opposed. By doing this, a human being can live a peaceful and healthy life.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'similarly', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'first of all', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.191823899371 0.247107183377 78% => OK
Verbs: 0.160377358491 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103773584906 0.0946595960268 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0440251572327 0.0501214627716 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0408805031447 0.0437548338989 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110062893082 0.122226691241 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0440251572327 0.0403226058552 109% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5262145231 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0283018867925 0.0326793684256 87% => OK
Particles: 0.00314465408805 0.00163938923432 192% => OK
Determiners: 0.100628930818 0.0861772015684 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0377358490566 0.021408717616 176% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1605.0 1933.35771543 83% => OK
No of words: 274.0 316.048096192 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85766423358 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.335766423358 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.244525547445 0.28420135186 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182481751825 0.203846283523 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0912408759124 0.137316102897 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5262145231 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569343065693 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 58.6978738414 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.2222222222 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2705186055 49.517814964 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1666666667 127.492653851 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2222222222 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.11111111111 0.814263465372 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 3.99599198397 225% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 39.6747769667 49.1944974215 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.41025641026 1.69124875643 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251922965318 0.332605444948 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0628855525425 0.102741220458 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0561552852074 0.0668466124924 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.441883661518 0.534860350844 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.112239061347 0.148594505496 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817906833577 0.134430193775 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514194107507 0.0742795772207 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.224159102231 0.324371583561 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.083992862813 0.0638462369009 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160504761486 0.228012699653 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304774796901 0.058150111329 52% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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