Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.
To have a successful career, formal education is considered to be one of the most important aspects. Having formal education is necessary but, it also restrains our minds and spirits from doing the things freely.
As people are formally educated, they are expected to behave in code of conduct for a party or some other event, but, when grownups see small children playing and enjoying by dancing, shouting etc. they often feel that if, there were no such rules and regulations, even they would have enjoyed in a way they would have liked to but, these manners and etiquette's are stopping them from doing so. This tells that formal education has forbid us from relishing our lives freely.
Similarly, when we are on dining table, as a part of formal education, we are taught to eat the food with forks and spoons but, real enjoyment of having a pizza is by taking a slice in our hand and then watching the melted cheese getting stretched as we take a bite out of it. Dining rules forbade us from doing so.
Whenever, there is an opportunity for expressing our sentiments during a success or a failure, we all restrained by the ideology of other people for example, after having a break up with your girlfriend with whom you might be having a 5 year relationship, one might feel of crying but, what would other think if I cry stops us from expressing our real and natural feelings. Likewise, whenever people get promoted or achieve some target, they might feel of shouting loudly and telling the whole world about their achievement but, this educated mindset stops us from doing so. It is necessary that we open up and express our thoughts freely in order to lead a healthier life because, if we restrict our feeling from being expressed, it can severely affect our heart.
On the contrary, formal education has helped us to improve our behavior, image and hygiene, leading us to a much healthier lifestyle. Though this might be true, but, people should sometimes overlook these restrictions that act as a small child and enjoy his life freely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 272, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... small child and enjoy his life freely.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'likewise', 'look', 'similarly', 'so', 'then', 'as for', 'for example', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.171284634761 0.240241500013 71% => OK
Verbs: 0.2040302267 0.157235817809 130% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0629722921914 0.0880659088768 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0453400503778 0.0497285424764 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0906801007557 0.0444667217837 204% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.115869017632 0.12292977631 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0982367758186 0.0406280797675 242% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.50425807844 2.79330140395 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0201511335013 0.030933414821 65% => OK
Particles: 0.00503778337531 0.0016655270985 302% => OK
Determiners: 0.0780856423174 0.0997080785238 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0226700251889 0.0249443105267 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0176322418136 0.0148568991511 119% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2058.0 2732.02544248 75% => OK
No of words: 357.0 452.878318584 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76470588235 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.322128851541 0.366273622748 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.226890756303 0.280924506359 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.168067226891 0.200843997647 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103641456583 0.132149295362 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50425807844 2.79330140395 90% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 219.290929204 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557422969188 0.48968727796 114% => OK
Word variations: 62.0059758569 55.4138127331 112% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6194690265 58% => OK
Sentence length: 29.75 23.380412469 127% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.2482091507 59.4972553346 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.5 141.124799967 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.75 23.380412469 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 0.674092028746 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 52.4390756303 51.4728631049 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.13333333333 1.64882698954 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208773972037 0.391690518653 53% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0770817922792 0.123202303941 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0563027816092 0.077325440228 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.583726069039 0.547984918172 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.182091817199 0.149214159877 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973719160305 0.161403998019 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688024113732 0.0892212321368 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.218549400595 0.385218514788 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0365790776053 0.0692045440612 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148711347441 0.275328986314 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598773849713 0.0653680567796 92% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.5995575221 74% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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