Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.
The crafting of woven baskets requires a specific and trained skill to make them proper and perfect. Though previously based on the findings it may be believed that Paleans are the only people in the prehistoric age with a known art of woven basket, the present development in archaeological science has forced us to rethink upon the belief.
The discovery of such type of baskets in some other area like Lithos may lead to the conception that those people are also known about the skill.There may be possibilities that Palean people might have train them but it is not a right thing to say they are the only user of this type of baskets.
As the ancient village Lithos was across a deep and broad Brim river there are possibilities of livelihoods near the river bank. But no evidence has been found by the leading archaeologists regarding their livelihood or any other related things. Finding something like coins, utensils or any other type of daily living materials might have lead it to the belief that the Paleans are the only group with the knowledge of the woven baskets.
In addition to this as there is no clue of any type of boat or floating materials used by Paleans it is a quite strong argument that they are not the only owner of the woven baskets.
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Suggestion: trained
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Suggestion:
... livelihoods near the river bank. But no evidence has been found by the leading a...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'as for', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260683760684 0.25644967241 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.145299145299 0.15541462614 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.111111111111 0.0836205057962 133% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0213675213675 0.0520304965353 41% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.042735042735 0.0272364105082 157% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.145299145299 0.125424944231 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0555555555556 0.0416121511921 134% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54383787045 2.79052419416 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.025641025641 0.026700313972 96% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.145299145299 0.113004496875 129% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0213675213675 0.0255425247493 84% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0127820249294 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1268.0 2731.13054187 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 225.0 446.07635468 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63555555556 6.12365571057 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.57801047555 85% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.275555555556 0.378187486979 73% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.213333333333 0.287650121315 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.137777777778 0.208842608468 66% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0755555555556 0.135150697306 56% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54383787045 2.79052419416 91% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 207.018472906 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542222222222 0.469332199767 116% => OK
Word variations: 50.5851274088 52.1807786196 97% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 20.039408867 35% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 32.1428571429 23.2022227129 139% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5261281428 57.7814097925 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.142857143 141.986410481 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1428571429 23.2022227129 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 0.724660767414 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.58251231527 84% => OK
Readability: 53.4761904762 51.9672348444 103% => OK
Elegance: 2.20408163265 1.8405768891 120% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453751262456 0.441005458295 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.178272060158 0.135418324435 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.117731065641 0.0829849096947 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.743659332456 0.58762219726 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.203211607088 0.147661913831 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.245218732359 0.193483328276 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684764821098 0.0970749176394 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.420812969476 0.42659136922 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.014564594277 0.0774707102158 19% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320465533063 0.312017818177 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429114643657 0.0698173142475 61% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.33743842365 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.87684729064 44% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 6.46551724138 62% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 5.36822660099 56% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 14.657635468 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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