“People's behaviour is largely determined by forces not of their own making”.
I, strongly agree with the assertion that people's mindset often gets influenced by the other factors which are not pertinent to them. To have a second opinion about anything is never harmful, as it helps to broaden the vista and it helps to eradicate any flaws present in the first opinion.
To concrete the support for the issue, some of the analytical facts have been presented as follows: Any country either democratic or communist, the paramount person always have a group of ingenious people around them, to help them, to take the important decisions during a certain detrimental national emergency. Though the leader is acute, shrewd and discerning, but sometimes their decisions may get clouded because of uncertain mental breakdowns.
The Technology is evolving with a great pace; many young ingenious minds are coming up with many innovative solutions to contemporary world's problems. One of the inspiring minds is of Elon Musk, the CEO of Tesla Motors and who founded SpaceX and Paypal. He wanted to find the solution of the world's most exigent problem of the energy crisis, so he decided to promote electric cars. He wanted to reduce the space travel expenses, so he discovered SpaceX. Likewise, there are also many other inventions done, just because the inventor became zealous, to come with the solutions of the enigmatic problems.
Also from the aforementioned points, an individual often chooses his path of career by getting influenced by their favourite TV stars, a sports person, a technocrat, an entrepreneur or by any other personalities. They are inspired by their success stories, so, they decide to make their own odyssey tale by trying to emulate them.
As it evident from the points addressed above, that every human being in this world are mostly influenced by the other forces surrounding it, and often such influences have proved beneficial to the individual and also to the development of the mankind.
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Suggestion: Also,
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
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...fluenced by their favourite TV stars, a sports person, a technocrat, an entrepreneur o...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'likewise', 'may', 'second', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.203966005666 0.240241500013 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.161473087819 0.157235817809 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110481586402 0.0880659088768 125% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0481586402266 0.0497285424764 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.056657223796 0.0444667217837 127% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113314447592 0.12292977631 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0453257790368 0.0406280797675 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72380990589 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0453257790368 0.030933414821 147% => OK
Particles: 0.0028328611898 0.0016655270985 170% => OK
Determiners: 0.113314447592 0.0997080785238 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0028328611898 0.0249443105267 11% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0056657223796 0.0148568991511 38% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1934.0 2732.02544248 71% => OK
No of words: 317.0 452.878318584 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.10094637224 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.58838876751 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.391167192429 0.366273622748 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.283911671924 0.280924506359 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.195583596215 0.200843997647 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.148264984227 0.132149295362 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72380990589 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 219.290929204 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618296529968 0.48968727796 126% => OK
Word variations: 71.8215035369 55.4138127331 130% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6194690265 58% => OK
Sentence length: 26.4166666667 23.380412469 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8277632569 59.4972553346 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.166666667 141.124799967 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 23.380412469 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.674092028746 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 54.8078338591 51.4728631049 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.36170212766 1.64882698954 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0956621794082 0.391690518653 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115822300878 0.123202303941 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0879550201273 0.077325440228 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.657685676521 0.547984918172 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156651442858 0.149214159877 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511111347994 0.161403998019 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350086453384 0.0892212321368 39% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.256485701303 0.385218514788 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0962095514831 0.0692045440612 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692370513278 0.275328986314 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380021904785 0.0653680567796 58% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.5995575221 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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