Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are required.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is certainly true that with the ever increasing number of fitness centers comes with the enhancement of people's lives in relation to health. Although there are positive view in favor of this, I believe that education is the key in promoting and therefore improving the wellness of the society. This essay will discuss both points of view before coming into a conclusion.
It is clear that sports centers has greatly affect the health of the people. It has a variety of activities that can improve and enhance the wellness of mankind. For instance, a fitness gym, includes a lot of equipment such as treadmill, dumbbell and many more, can contribute to muscle building and body toning. Another example is a yoga class. It can help people to meditate and therefore ameliorate the spiritual being of individuals attending the class. Looking at the examples makes it clear why a lot of people chooses to enroll in sports facilities for health improvement.
On the other hand, I believe that proper education is a more appropriate way on improving one's health. This can be obtained by attending into health education classes. For example, in my community, we have health organization run by the government that conducts health education to the community. By attending to this classes, people can be properly informed about diet, exercise and healthy lifestyle. With the point of view mentioned above, it is evident that education gives way to a better health among individuals.
In conclusion, while the benefits of sports facilities allow the citizens to enhance their overall healthiness, I certainly believe that good health can be acquired through educating ourselves with the proper eating habits, a decent exercise, and the ability to sustain a healthy lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: affected
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272727272727 0.247107183377 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.15987460815 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0658307210031 0.0946595960268 70% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0219435736677 0.0501214627716 44% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0407523510972 0.0437548338989 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.147335423197 0.122226691241 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0501567398119 0.0403226058552 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80241785157 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0282131661442 0.0326793684256 86% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.112852664577 0.0861772015684 131% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0219435736677 0.021408717616 102% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00940438871473 0.011925033212 79% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1773.0 1933.35771543 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 316.048096192 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13494809689 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.429065743945 0.374742101984 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.332179930796 0.28420135186 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.228373702422 0.203846283523 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.148788927336 0.137316102897 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80241785157 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543252595156 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 55.406032741 60.7387585426 91% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2666666667 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5363206758 49.517814964 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.2 127.492653851 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.814263465372 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 52.4846597463 49.1944974215 107% => OK
Elegance: 2.11267605634 1.69124875643 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402637861711 0.332605444948 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104998703389 0.102741220458 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.071975246683 0.0668466124924 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.54686863973 0.534860350844 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.183219238433 0.148594505496 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165476187866 0.134430193775 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642500153345 0.0742795772207 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.350577262642 0.324371583561 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0412475861488 0.0638462369009 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276358992753 0.228012699653 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349991371082 0.058150111329 60% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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