Some people think that it will better for the large companies and industries to move to regional areas outside large urban centers.
Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
The proposal in moving the multinational companies outside the cities is an argument both supported and refuted by many. While some believe that this will be beneficial as this will promote economic growth in rural areas, others think that it will not be favorable to the company. It is agreed that the advantages outweigh disadvantages as it will be discussed.
The major factor to consider in relocating the factories in rural places is economic growth. As this means that more jobs will be generated and people’s quality of life will improve. For example, in the recent survey at the University of Queensland, it concluded that when businesses are spread in the adjacent towns, more residents become employed resulting in the improvement in people’s life. Furthermore, it can also lead to an increase tax collections for the government, making it sufficient to meet the needs of its residents. All of these are the positive indicators of economic growth. In contrast, if the rural areas were not converted into a business district, the town will not progress and still belong to a backward society.
The downside effect of massive transformation of the town into an industrial park is the cost of relocation. A huge amount of outflow will be required for a company to reconstruct their infrastructure which includes the manufacturing plants and the satellite offices. The rate of return for this investment will take them a long time to recover and this will have a negative effect on the expected income of the company.
In conclusion, I supported the argument that the advantage of economic growth that has a beneficial effect on the society greatly outweigh the relocation cost and late return of investment by the company. It is projected that more companies will be encouraged to do business outside the city.
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| 2016-08-04 | Julian | 67 | view |
- Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women.Do you agree? 67
- Some people think that it will better for the large companies and industries to move to regional areas outside large urban centers.Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages? 67
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237951807229 0.247107183377 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.150602409639 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0963855421687 0.0946595960268 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0210843373494 0.0501214627716 42% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0331325301205 0.0437548338989 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.144578313253 0.122226691241 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0421686746988 0.0403226058552 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.99490190548 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0240963855422 0.0326793684256 74% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.147590361446 0.0861772015684 171% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0361445783133 0.021408717616 169% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00903614457831 0.011925033212 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1836.0 1933.35771543 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 316.048096192 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09966777409 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.378737541528 0.374742101984 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.299003322259 0.28420135186 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.252491694352 0.203846283523 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.152823920266 0.137316102897 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99490190548 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.037074148 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528239202658 0.56093040696 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.8385590239 60.7387585426 89% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.5 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5401103341 49.517814964 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.142857143 127.492653851 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.814263465372 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 51.4003322259 49.1944974215 104% => OK
Elegance: 2.07352941176 1.69124875643 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387262893599 0.332605444948 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.128831363757 0.102741220458 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0933028183621 0.0668466124924 140% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.594266375725 0.534860350844 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15043940659 0.148594505496 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184434615542 0.134430193775 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063073665835 0.0742795772207 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.480193845616 0.324371583561 148% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.016780300438 0.0638462369009 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296016033207 0.228012699653 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047117289372 0.058150111329 81% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 10.4468937876 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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