As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
The world is developing more everyday and technology is becoming bigger part of our life day by day. Everyday new kind of ideas are introduced by the experts to make our life more easier. But, this surely does not mean that thinking ability of humans are deteriorating, as humans are the one researching and developing these technologies. In my view, technology is a boon to the society and not a bane.
Consider, one person has to travel on a daily basis to his or her workplace, the most easiest way one can opt is going by a vehicle as it will save time as well as energy. Suppose, one has to do complex calculation ,using a calculator will definitely save time. Technology has now advanced to such a level that one can use it for ordering foods,delivering things, posting a message immediately to the whole world by using the social media or it can be just talking to your loved ones using your cellphone. Now,you can book tickets for any show or your travel ticket just by sitting at home.In today's world our day start with technology the best example is just a simple alarm clock or using an electric kettle to prepare coffee.
Even, when one has to give an exam just by sitting at home technology plays crucial into role. Students can apply to any college located anywhere on earth . For the whole process of GRE students rely on technology from registering for the exam to taking admissions in the college. In medical world also technology plays a major role to detect any kind of disease from a simple x-ray to cancer detection. Technology is life saving. Although, the concept of deteriorating thinking ability can be denied as for using a simple washing machines, computer,vehicle or even a simple calculator the person has to think to use it in the best optimum way. People think to make life more easier which in short develops their thinking ability more and more.
The bulk of examples presented above clearly states that technology when use for right purpose and in the correct way it only eases life of human species and does not deteriorate the thinking ability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...iorate. The world is developing more everyday and technology is becoming bigger part ...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...roduced by the experts to make our life more easier. But, this surely does not mean that th...
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Line 6, column 82, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'easiest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: easiest
...aily basis to his or her workplace, the most easiest way one can opt is going by a vehicle a...
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Line 6, column 82, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the easiest'.
Suggestion: most the easiest
...aily basis to his or her workplace, the most easiest way one can opt is going by a vehicle a...
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Line 6, column 215, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ppose, one has to do complex calculation ,using a calculator will definitely save ...
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Line 6, column 345, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , delivering
...l that one can use it for ordering foods,delivering things, posting a message immediately t...
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Line 6, column 510, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , you
...our loved ones using your cellphone. Now,you can book tickets for any show or your t...
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Line 6, column 591, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...r travel ticket just by sitting at home.In todays world our day start with technol...
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Line 9, column 155, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...to any college located anywhere on earth . For the whole process of GRE students ...
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Line 9, column 551, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , vehicle
...sing a simple washing machines, computer,vehicle or even a simple calculator the person ...
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Line 9, column 673, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... optimum way. People think to make life more easier which in short develops their thinking ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'as for', 'as to', 'in short', 'kind of', 'as well as', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25768321513 0.240241500013 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.170212765957 0.157235817809 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0732860520095 0.0880659088768 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.063829787234 0.0497285424764 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0401891252955 0.0444667217837 90% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111111111111 0.12292977631 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0661938534279 0.0406280797675 163% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69155967683 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0449172576832 0.030933414821 145% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0874704491726 0.0997080785238 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0212765957447 0.0249443105267 85% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00945626477541 0.0148568991511 64% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2233.0 2732.02544248 82% => OK
No of words: 389.0 452.878318584 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74035989717 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.305912596401 0.366273622748 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236503856041 0.280924506359 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.141388174807 0.200843997647 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0951156812339 0.132149295362 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69155967683 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 219.290929204 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506426735219 0.48968727796 103% => OK
Word variations: 55.199645942 55.4138127331 100% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 22.8823529412 23.380412469 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6957355861 59.4972553346 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.352941176 141.124799967 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8823529412 23.380412469 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.647058823529 0.674092028746 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.21349557522 211% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 46.5327385453 51.4728631049 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.58620689655 1.64882698954 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.541391074953 0.391690518653 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.142657125624 0.123202303941 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0846074152435 0.077325440228 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.545635451978 0.547984918172 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.210229046572 0.149214159877 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.210817067665 0.161403998019 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.209383902322 0.0892212321368 235% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.299782329798 0.385218514788 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0794263920919 0.0692045440612 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.421492776403 0.275328986314 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.299478399965 0.0653680567796 458% => Less connections among paragraphs
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.