tpo 11
Nowadays, internet plays a pivotal rolls in the life of any person. Surely, every thing has good and bed effects, and it is depend on each person to choose the way for using internet. I bilieve we can gain many valuable data and information from internet. Internet has many advantages, including many pdf book for reading, many websites about healghty and necessary news that people need to know.
First, let us look at what a person can typically gain from a internet. Reading a lot of book in the internet is the best reason for claiming that internet has many benefits. For example, when I write my these during my PhD program, I need one book that there is not in any library in our city, and I downloaded it from one website and used it. Furthermore, many people prefer to read books in the internet instead of original books. Because reading from internet is easy and sometimes free, each person can readily benefits from the advantages of the books.
There is also more subtle point we most consider. Using many instruction in websites about healthy, help anyone to become less illness, and it is very great for any society to have less disease. For instance, I do not conern about consuming to much salt in my foods, but after reading an article about the harming of salt I use a few salt in my meals. Also, each year people die because they do not have access to essential information about their body, and internet can omit this problem.
Finally, I cannot oversee the fact that internet gives us important news. If each country have to speak to their people about significant issue, media is the best mean to do it, and in fact, nowadays, internet is the one of the most effective media among people. Last year, one virus spread out around some cities in our country. Our goverment tried to solve this problem, but they need to people to contribute to their programs. During this condition, internets play an important roll, and they aware people about dangerious of this malady and the ways for afflicting by this virus by the help of many internet websites.
- chance to alter one important thing about my hometown 63
- Your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does 30
- Do you agree or disagree with this statement?Television advertising directed toward young children(aged two and five) should not be allowed 73
- replacement for the automobile's engine source of power 86
- tpo 6 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'roll'?
Suggestion: roll
Nowadays, internet plays a pivotal rolls in the life of any person. Surely, ever...
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Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...ing has good and bed effects, and it is depend on each person to choose the way for us...
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Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t what a person can typically gain from a internet. Reading a lot of book in the ...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun book seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of books'.
Suggestion: a lot of books
...typically gain from a internet. Reading a lot of book in the internet is the best reason for ...
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Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...sometimes free, each person can readily benefits from the advantages of the books. Th...
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Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...stance, I do not conern about consuming to much salt in my foods, but after readin...
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Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun salt seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little salt'.
Suggestion: little salt
...ticle about the harming of salt I use a few salt in my meals. Also, each year people die...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245145631068 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.143203883495 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0800970873786 0.0866891130778 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0388349514563 0.046263068375 84% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0703883495146 0.0685040099705 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128640776699 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0242718446602 0.0351676179071 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.3961103639 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0339805825243 0.0309702414327 110% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0898058252427 0.0887237588012 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0121359223301 0.0209618222197 58% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00485436893204 0.0139019557991 35% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2076.0 2387.08602151 87% => OK
No of words: 367.0 408.028673835 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65667574932 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.302452316076 0.338922669872 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.217983651226 0.251872472559 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16621253406 0.174417080927 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0899182561308 0.112833075102 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3961103639 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517711171662 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 55.8724189272 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3888888889 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1803567595 48.84282405 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3888888889 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.644075263715 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 42.1872540115 45.7405998639 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.57692307692 1.45489161554 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.300154397459 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0847223252824 0.103427244359 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0554741964116 0.0752933317313 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.474923101554 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135030238162 0.151897553556 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.114077575197 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0781384742642 0% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.366934351438 0.336927656856 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0921230668307 0.067059652881 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.210909579961 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0618886996521 0% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.