Write a letter to your new employer asking him for extension in date of joining.
You should write
1. why you are writing?
2. what are the reasons for delay?
3. How long will it take to join ?
Start the letter with
Dear......
Dated: 12 August 2016
Dear Sir,
Subject Line: Request for an extension to join as Branch Manager
Greetings Sir, I hope the state missive finds you in the very best. It is imperative to impart the notion that this letter entails a request for an extension in date of joining. I was expected to join your good office on August 15, 2016, which will not be possible now. The reasons for the aforestated request are highlighted here under.
Firstly, I had a fever last week due to which I was unable to attend office. Whereas, there was an important assignment/task which was pending. Moreover, I feel that it is my moral responsibility to accomplish the subject task before leaving.
Secondly, my employer has advised me to complete the task assignment in all respect and submit. Furthermore, It is part of my contract to finish the assigned tasks before submitting the resignation. Consequently, it would take one more week to complete the same.
In summation, I shall be grateful on my part if the request supra can kindly be accommodated and extension of one week can be provided. This means that revised joining date would be August 22, 2016. The inconvenience caused is highly regretted. Hope to hearing from you soon. Many thanks for your time.
yours sincerely,
Aatif Imtiaz
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to which I was unable to attend office. Whereas, there was an important assignment/task...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...you soon. Many thanks for your time. yours sincerely, Aatif Imtiaz
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Discourse Markers used:
['consequently', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'whereas', 'i feel']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21686746988 0.220444632235 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.180722891566 0.167888034529 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0682730923695 0.0606518309736 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0481927710843 0.0506257000042 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0763052208835 0.118615021944 64% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0883534136546 0.107062808482 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0522088353414 0.041066498444 127% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80467162789 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0401606425703 0.0385302599488 104% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0803212851406 0.0714148451538 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0240963855422 0.0191574576366 126% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0120481927711 0.00930345855455 130% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1297.0 1141.60824742 114% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.134020619 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92237442922 5.53046319177 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78085437643 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.337899543379 0.284621296913 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246575342466 0.211203875043 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.168949771689 0.133321485273 127% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109589041096 0.0843313296314 130% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80467162789 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625570776256 0.622163163488 101% => OK
Word variations: 64.5685127465 62.8969750728 103% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 12.9587628866 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.6875 16.4300151701 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4071526542 44.7399317507 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0625 90.9928171075 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6875 16.4300151701 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6875 0.613754768223 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.09278350515 96% => OK
Readability: 38.3450342466 37.5504026743 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.17105263158 1.13073093955 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356006951392 0.331212695627 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0711758922484 0.0927372745006 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.070647529666 0.0736520305886 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.534210416391 0.579516596996 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.219647116657 0.180689518051 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116275870749 0.122183219658 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780779139284 0.0765303033291 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.166314522715 0.211926503985 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0865522278174 0.0737400523855 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169822014619 0.203819188451 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119432547235 0.067151250289 178% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.0206185567 124% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 4.73195876289 148% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.56701030928 195% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 8.32989690722 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.