Technological Advance Computers are replacing more and more jobs. describe some positions that may be lost because of computer and discuss at least one problem that may result.
Nowaday, Technologies are become more popular in automation. In most of cases men have been replace by computers for accuracy, so that number of job vacancy are reducing.
In 21st century, Business is growing drastically, Job vacancy is also increased but computers which have replace men so that job are reduce. For an example in current situation CEO of company appointed only one accountant, who manage only computers data.There are no need for take men for individual field so that above example one computer is replace some men for account.
Secondly, International company like TATA, Reliance etc. Production System are depending only on automation which are based on computer Program, so that They cannot be appointed more employee for maintain production. In this situation groups of workers have deducted by applying computer based on automation system, In which totally process are comptuerised.
Other phase, consider above example, if production system is totally depends on automation then some problems will create at some occasion. Whenever computer system crashed or get error so that Whole production system can be fail or Produce inaccurate production. if human employee works on that place that there are negligible change of fail system.
As per above discussion, we can conclude that whole world are growing so that computerised system needed for accurate work but in some case computers can give accurate work but it will danger in future. At that place men can solve that situation because of “human are human”.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'replaced'.
Suggestion: replaced
...omation. In most of cases men have been replace by computers for accuracy, so that numb...
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Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'replaced'.
Suggestion: replaced
...also increased but computers which have replace men so that job are reduce. For an exam...
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Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'computers'' or 'computer's'?
Suggestion: computers'; computer's
...ed only one accountant, who manage only computers data.There are no need for take men for...
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Line 2, column 255, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...ountant, who manage only computers data.There are no need for take men for individual...
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Line 2, column 345, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'replaced'.
Suggestion: replaced
...d so that above example one computer is replace some men for account. Secondly, Inter...
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Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (International) must be used with a third-person verb: 'companies'.
Suggestion: companies
... for account. Secondly, International company like TATA, Reliance etc. Production Sys...
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Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...e TATA, Reliance etc. Production System are depending only on automation which are based on c...
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Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... some occasion. Whenever computer system crashed or get error so that Whole produ...
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Line 4, column 266, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... fail or Produce inaccurate production. if human employee works on that place that...
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Line 4, column 266, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... fail or Produce inaccurate production. if human employee works on that place that...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...n give accurate work but it will danger in future. At that place men can solve that situa...
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Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...give accurate work but it will danger in future. At that place men can solve that...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.300724637681 0.247107183377 122% => OK
Verbs: 0.18115942029 0.155533422707 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0652173913043 0.0946595960268 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0434782608696 0.0501214627716 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0108695652174 0.0437548338989 25% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.177536231884 0.122226691241 145% => OK
Participles: 0.054347826087 0.0403226058552 135% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.79388873151 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0 0.0326793684256 0% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0471014492754 0.0861772015684 55% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0253623188406 0.021408717616 118% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0144927536232 0.011925033212 122% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1552.0 1933.35771543 80% => OK
No of words: 245.0 316.048096192 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.33469387755 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.404081632653 0.374742101984 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.342857142857 0.28420135186 121% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.240816326531 0.203846283523 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.151020408163 0.137316102897 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79388873151 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.037074148 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54693877551 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 52.8569158528 60.7387585426 87% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4166666667 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4135601439 49.517814964 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.333333333 127.492653851 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.814263465372 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 3.99599198397 300% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 54.7023809524 49.1944974215 111% => OK
Elegance: 2.26153846154 1.69124875643 134% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218280344593 0.332605444948 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.127613302246 0.102741220458 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.091792191305 0.0668466124924 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.611193124069 0.534860350844 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161953278521 0.148594505496 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949637934927 0.134430193775 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454987671839 0.0742795772207 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.267859520148 0.324371583561 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.051109964546 0.0638462369009 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138115735306 0.228012699653 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175679234933 0.058150111329 30% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.