Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Today, there are split opinions regarding children education sense. Some people assert that competition should be made between student. While another group of thinkers argue that co-operation is better for children instead of competition more useful adult. But personally, i am in partly favor of latter view.
As for those who tend to deem that competition must be held. They feel this way because competition is an essential part of growth. In other words, competition encourage to student to do herculean work for set the benchmark. Furthermore, in vacation, student can join tuition for extraordinary classes which cannot be thought in school. there are some plus point to have extracurricular information comprising language, technology. Moreover, nowadays, plenty of competitive exams available for admission in higher level university. Competition can help to student in cracking exams. One study shows that only 40% of student could go in good Quaternary high schools and colleges.
In contrast, other people hold the notion that quality of co-operation has more benefits than competition. Firstly, student are busy to study in school as well as home with tutor. So that they become selfish owing to live alone. However, they can improve weakness by co-operation. Additionally, students can learn about group work which succor in commercial life. For instance, group of student know strong zone and weak zone of other one so they can improve weak side by group study.
In conclusion, I would concede that, competition can help to get higher number. Despite that co-operation improve your education level, commercial life as well as social knowledge. I am convinced that children should go with amalgamation of co-operation and competition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41391941392 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96688825225 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4751815754 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.380952381 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240914168953 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704028106058 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624553910099 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161213871179 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763855559029 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.21 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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