Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
As some people may hold a view that the current young are careless about the community and its demand; however, others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that nowadays, young people care about the community and they are helpful whenever it is necessary. I personally agree with the second belief. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons which persuade me to put forward this perspective.
The first exquisite reason which gives adherence to my outlook is that in modern society, there is a plenty of advertisement about this issue. Indeed, nowadays, the charity and beneficial advocacy is a trend. This trend is flourishing by the advertisement, and it becomes an adapted norm. In this condition, if a teenager who grows up in this atmosphere will follow this norm without any hesitation in his or her future life. For instance, in my country, each year, there are various charities during a year, which ask the people to help the poor people. As a result, a majority of youth in my society participates in the beneficial activities of the society.
The next fact embraced my idea is that there is an alteration in the perspective toward the surrounding. As in the far past, people main concern was their own satisfaction; today, most of the people are in the welfare, so their priorities change from their own to the other with the difficulties. According to the noteworthy, intelligent survey conducted in my country, there is approximately forty-five percent of increment in the help for the community in last ten years. Besides, based on another cogent statistic, the standard of people's lives in last decade is enhanced about a three-fold with the comparison of the past. Consequently, these two surveys and statistic reveal the alteration of viewpoints in the people.
On the other hand, some may surmise that since the modern lifestyle obliges the fast pace, the young people are careless; however, they misinterpret the hectic lifestyle as the carelessness. It is explicit as a crystal that the hectic lifestyle does not lead to the ignorance. A vivid example can be given to shed a light on the issue is my own example. I am a dentist; I work for eight hours a day. In addition, I do have a tough schedule which prevents me from participating in the lots of social activity. On the contrary, I help my secretor who possesses an improper life and she is not able to handle her life lonely. Last month, she could not pay her house rent. Thus, I paid her rent instead of her not to abound her house.
To wrap it up, based on the whole aforementioned reasons, one can logically draw the conclusion that the current young people are more eager to help the community; inasmuch as, there is more advertisement about this issue, and people's attitude have changed.
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'as a result', 'on the contrary', 'on the whole', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216266173752 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.127541589649 0.158761421928 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101663585952 0.0866891130778 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0314232902033 0.046263068375 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0646950092421 0.0685040099705 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125693160813 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0166358595194 0.0351676179071 47% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.85380428422 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0203327171904 0.0309702414327 66% => OK
Particles: 0.00369685767098 0.00188951952338 196% => OK
Determiners: 0.140480591497 0.0887237588012 158% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0147874306839 0.0209618222197 71% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0110905730129 0.0139019557991 80% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2818.0 2387.08602151 118% => OK
No of words: 481.0 408.028673835 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85862785863 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326403326403 0.338922669872 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255717255717 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191268191268 0.174417080927 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130977130977 0.112833075102 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85380428422 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528066528067 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 62.7700622174 59.2087087015 106% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.9130434783 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4623334136 48.84282405 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.52173913 120.699889404 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9130434783 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.695652173913 0.644075263715 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 46.48476905 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.60330578512 1.45489161554 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215634788333 0.300154397459 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117094158624 0.103427244359 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0999774657835 0.0752933317313 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.512783248494 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.194999621888 0.151897553556 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815547668078 0.114077575197 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453234640351 0.0781384742642 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.426628323964 0.336927656856 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0739302845893 0.067059652881 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14702607873 0.210909579961 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312589825552 0.0618886996521 51% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.