Should parents punish their children and to what extent is punishment important in a child’s life? Give your opinion.
There has been ongoing debate regarding parents should punish their children or not. Where a group of people support that, punishing a necessary, while a group of thinkers support, punishing is not require. However, both have own negative and positive side. Therefore before commenting on my decision, both the opinion should be discussed.
Examine the foremen, the primary argument, the proponents would put forward is punishing necessary for making improvement in the future. This is because, when seed made mistake, then it is necessary to give punish, for prove to be wrong. In addition, they also believe that, punishment always remembers in their life, and they will never try to that thing, again. The reason is that punishment is a great teacher of seeds.
On the contrary, the latter view suggests that, we have also another way to improve behavior of seeds. Because, seed are also a human begins and sometimes mistake is possible for everyone in this world. Beside this, if, punishment level high, then seed behave rudely and sometime in fact they try to suicide as well. So, punishment is not safe way for our seeds. Furthermore, seeds sometimes festered by harmful punishment and they cannot focus on study. Late on, they don’t give respect to their parents and chance to change behavior of seed. Albeit, children are get nasty result in the exam by punishment.
To wrap up and voice my opinion, I would like to say that, no punishment is the best way to deal with thus situation.
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.210702341137 0.247107183377 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.173913043478 0.155533422707 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0602006688963 0.0946595960268 64% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0802675585284 0.0501214627716 160% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0468227424749 0.0437548338989 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107023411371 0.122226691241 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0367892976589 0.0403226058552 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53691255191 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0334448160535 0.0326793684256 102% => OK
Particles: 0.00334448160535 0.00163938923432 204% => OK
Determiners: 0.0735785953177 0.0861772015684 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0200668896321 0.021408717616 94% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0066889632107 0.011925033212 56% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1504.0 1933.35771543 78% => OK
No of words: 252.0 316.048096192 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96825396825 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.373015873016 0.374742101984 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269841269841 0.28420135186 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.194444444444 0.203846283523 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115079365079 0.137316102897 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53691255191 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623015873016 0.56093040696 111% => OK
Word variations: 67.3415628988 60.7387585426 111% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.75 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6900613525 49.517814964 54% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 127.492653851 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 0.814263465372 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 42.7341269841 49.1944974215 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.17777777778 1.69124875643 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321774002765 0.332605444948 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0823200424802 0.102741220458 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0581734316874 0.0668466124924 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.459919127343 0.534860350844 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156903455943 0.148594505496 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11076679621 0.134430193775 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633970985996 0.0742795772207 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.269250935092 0.324371583561 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.108802277642 0.0638462369009 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199149817055 0.228012699653 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325329850647 0.058150111329 56% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.