Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.
When it comes to the issue of students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friend, some people may agree with this statement and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other might strongly disagree with this idea and have different opinions. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that the students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friend because there are so many reasons support my point of view. This short essay will demonstrate some point regarding this issue in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that the students are more influenced by their teacher than by their friend. The life is very rapid now. Most of the parents are busy with their job. So, children spend most of their day in the school. The teacher can be the person whom the child needs instead of his parents in the time that he spend it in the school. For instance, the teacher be the children’s model that they wish to be like him.
Another reason why I advocate the attitude that the teachers have great influenced on the students even more than their friends. The teachers studied who to treat the students. So, they now who to advice the students in way combine both the friend’s behave and the parent’s care. Eventually, this combination make the students trust their teacher well and feel free to talk and effect by his advice.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that the students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends. If the teacher act with his students as a friend, we will give them his experience in the life but in more interesting way. While the student’s friend are poor in the experience because they are all have the same experience. All that make the student feel it is more useful to them for asking their teachers than asking their friends.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion that says. People who hold the opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelming too much to be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 357, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on make the students trust their teacher well and feel free to talk and effect by...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'for instance', 'first of all', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21261682243 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.140186915888 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0654205607477 0.0866891130778 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0490654205607 0.046263068375 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0957943925234 0.0685040099705 140% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.128504672897 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.018691588785 0.0351676179071 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53779691905 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0210280373832 0.0309702414327 68% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.116822429907 0.0887237588012 132% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.018691588785 0.0209618222197 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0210280373832 0.0139019557991 151% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2182.0 2387.08602151 91% => OK
No of words: 378.0 408.028673835 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77248677249 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.275132275132 0.338922669872 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.232804232804 0.251872472559 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15873015873 0.174417080927 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0820105820106 0.112833075102 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53779691905 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470899470899 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.678355173 59.2087087015 84% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.9 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4332162097 48.84282405 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.1 120.699889404 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 0.644075263715 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 42.1804232804 45.7405998639 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.26229508197 1.45489161554 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.451239663067 0.300154397459 150% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.155565132459 0.103427244359 150% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.102552308729 0.0752933317313 136% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.557626338943 0.497263757937 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.133044262473 0.151897553556 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18175877783 0.114077575197 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147629792991 0.0781384742642 189% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.382767951928 0.336927656856 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.124898140911 0.067059652881 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28997424607 0.210909579961 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142242888472 0.0618886996521 230% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.