The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.
The bar graph elucidates how many travelers using three distinguish airports in New York City from 1995 to 2000. Overall, the number of travelers using LaGuardia and Newark rose substantially despite the fact that, LaGuardia was received the highest number of travelers for most of periods, whereas John F. Kennedy airport experienced a periodic fluctuation.
Initially, LaGuardia had the dominant travelers of about 35 million of passengers. John F. Kennedy was the second highest traveler received with just above 25 million of passengers and only 15 million travelers used Newark airports. By 1997, the number of passengers using John F Kennedy rose to close to 50 million travelers, LaGuardia and Newark had risen stably, to reach at just over 40 million and just under 40 million of passengers, respectively.
After 1997 till the end of the projected period, La Guardia airport recorded the highest traveler usages where it reached a peak at nearly 70 million passengers in 2000. In contrast, the number of travelers using Newark had remained unchanged at around 41 million travelers, whereas the number of travelers using John F. Kennedy airport rose constantly to reach at approximately 45 million passengers by 2000, despite the periodic drop in its passenger of just over 30 million passengers in 1999.
- Fossil fuels are used in many countries. Other countries use alternative sources of energy, such as wind and solar power, which is encouraged. To what extent is this positive or negative development? 73
- The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. 73
- “Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree? 67
- The map below is of the town of Gralsdon. A new supermarket is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. 67
- It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the periods') or simply say ''most periods''.
Suggestion: most of the periods; most periods
...ved the highest number of travelers for most of periods, whereas John F. Kennedy airport experi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['second', 'whereas', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.288209606987 0.268076937826 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.109170305677 0.116061578633 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0524017467249 0.0759168565197 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0524017467249 0.0366838410393 143% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00873362445415 0.0131127313244 67% => OK
Prepositions: 0.165938864629 0.155750635184 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0393013100437 0.0379272487307 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83355341282 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0218340611354 0.0210936926555 104% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0655021834061 0.0948980150116 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00873362445415 0.00967000014798 90% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1316.0 1161.00487805 113% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.9 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.26666666667 5.90752243213 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73763899035 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.414285714286 0.337110787985 123% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.352380952381 0.247514529752 142% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.219047619048 0.171178102325 128% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.161904761905 0.112407865282 144% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83355341282 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.546246751206 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.6176929317 49.3433353143 92% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0094962315 130% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.4071008863 42.9750493124 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.0 135.714022679 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 23.0094962315 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.689975730869 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 65.2380952381 47.7609492067 137% => OK
Elegance: 2.89743589744 2.94281807926 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3400451244 0.418131533498 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.198352153421 0.181151798455 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0778433775281 0.0850326197045 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.717571134378 0.706616315825 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124917297506 0.157042692854 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207343949321 0.228904883108 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842064729688 0.108899403657 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.433203957981 0.367819155151 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0753288206104 0.0812612215331 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283300380257 0.316326947829 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998995403869 0.0921553760075 108% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.