We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work closely with)?
The people that we work with have many effects on us. Some people believe that it is not important that whom you work with; others would disagree. In my opinion our co-workers have many effect on our life for the following reasons.
First and foremost, it is really important that your colleagues be knowledgeable. If you work with some people who are really know how to work, you will learn that. For example, five years ago after sending my resume to lots of companies in search of a good job, finally I was accepted in a really big company as a fashion designer which is I was really interested in. It was great because it was a great company and there was really famous people that working with them was my dream for years. They were really knowledgeable and I learnt many things from these people and after about three years, finally, I started my own work and now I am a owner of a big company and I am really thankful to my co-workers in my first job which teach me many useful things.
Another reason is that your colleagues can make you feel energetic and happy which cause to increase your efficiency. For example about seven years ago when I was studying in university I had to work in a laboratory for three months to graduate. At first I really hated my job because I really felt depressed in the laboratory. I had to work with some old guys who just think about the last day of the month that they got their salary. But after a month I had some new colleagues which were really energetic and working with them made me felt that I really love my job. We had a lot of fun together and even after the work we went out and I really think that that two months were one of my memorable months.
Also our co-workers are the people that we spend most of our days with them and they really can help us when ever we need. For example, I remember when I was in that laboratory, I had problem with my family for about a week and my colleagues were really helpful and they helped me to relaxed and solve my problem. I just wanted to do something stupid. I decided to abandon my home and try to live on my own and forget my family forever but they helped me to realize that I was really wrong and I just was reacting like a child.
In sum, I think that people that you are working with not only affect your daily life but also they can change your future. In my opinion people should really try to be in a place where their co-workers are some great, helpful and knowledgeable people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...ou work with some people who are really know how to work, you will learn that. For e...
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Line 2, column 642, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...lly, I started my own work and now I am a owner of a big company and I am really ...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increasing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: increasing
...ou feel energetic and happy which cause to increase your efficiency. For example about seve...
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Line 3, column 632, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...ogether and even after the work we went out and I really think that that two months...
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Line 3, column 655, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
...the work we went out and I really think that that two months were one of my memorable mon...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...nths were one of my memorable months. Also our co-workers are the people that we s...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'for example', 'i think', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.159045725646 0.229887763892 69% => OK
Verbs: 0.17296222664 0.158761421928 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0755467196819 0.0866891130778 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0675944333996 0.046263068375 146% => OK
Pronouns: 0.155069582505 0.0685040099705 226% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.133200795229 0.118717715034 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0159045725646 0.0351676179071 45% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.3078628184 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0258449304175 0.0309702414327 83% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0576540755467 0.0887237588012 65% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0119284294235 0.0209618222197 57% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0238568588469 0.0139019557991 172% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2489.0 2387.08602151 104% => OK
No of words: 472.0 408.028673835 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27330508475 5.86048508987 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.258474576271 0.338922669872 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.156779661017 0.251872472559 62% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0889830508475 0.174417080927 51% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0614406779661 0.112833075102 54% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3078628184 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.425847457627 0.524397521467 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.4180503117 59.2087087015 80% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.6 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.025570636 48.84282405 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.45 120.699889404 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 39.2779661017 45.7405998639 86% => OK
Elegance: 0.778894472362 1.45489161554 54% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263731724522 0.300154397459 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101326773804 0.103427244359 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0715167099023 0.0752933317313 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.515083862192 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145952982753 0.151897553556 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11775320999 0.114077575197 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812538266507 0.0781384742642 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.353580037849 0.336927656856 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.104538733503 0.067059652881 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205296573352 0.210909579961 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721851100779 0.0618886996521 117% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.