As people live longer and longer, the idea of cloning human beings in order to provide spare parts is becoming a reality. The idea horrifies most people, yet it is no longer more science fiction.
To what extend do you agree with such a procedure? Have you any reservations?
One of the matters raising certain concern among society member is most of people want live longer. To make it clearer, the problem is the idea of cloning human beings. From my view point, I believe that I disagree to become live longer they will provide spare parts is becoming a reality by cloning human. It is horrifies many people, yet it is no longer more science fiction.
There are several reasons why the idea of cloning human being becomes the bad idea. Firstly, the idea will produce the similar person. This means that will be the same person in the same time. If it happens, It will make horrible situation because giving chance to bad people use cloning from other person for doing a crime. For instance robbery, steal and etc.
Another point worth mentioning is that people will think about immortal. Before idea of cloning human represented, they think that they will lose their family because of age. But when the idea of cloning human comes, they will attempt to clone their family.
Finally, it can provoke some people thinking about using it to achieve their goals with the wrong way.
In conclusion, after all arguments are discussed. My expectations that cloning human will be become disaster because some of people will use it to wrong doing. So live will better without cloning human program and back to thinking about normal live that every people will die.
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Essay evaluation report
One of the matters raising certain concern among society member is most of people want live longer.
One of the matters raising certain concern among society member is that most of people want live longer.
It is horrifies many people, yet it is no longer more science fiction.
It horrifies many people, yet it is no longer a science fiction.
My expectations that cloning human will be become disaster
My expectations are that cloning human will become a disaster
So live will better
So life will be better
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Words: 239 350 //Minimum 250 words wanted.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 239 350
No. of Characters: 1114 1500
No. of Different Words: 134 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.932 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.661 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.051 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 78 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 54 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 16 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 8 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.938 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.297 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.438 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.334 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.574 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.07 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...certain concern among society member is most of people want live longer. To make it clearer, t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ng a crime. For instance robbery, steal and etc. Another point worth mentioning is th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
...g human will be become disaster because some of people will use it to wrong doing. So live wil...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'so', 'after all', 'for instance', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2 0.247107183377 81% => OK
Verbs: 0.203773584906 0.155533422707 131% => OK
Adjectives: 0.109433962264 0.0946595960268 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0188679245283 0.0501214627716 38% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0716981132075 0.0437548338989 164% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.120754716981 0.122226691241 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0754716981132 0.0403226058552 187% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.14425247246 2.80594681477 76% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0264150943396 0.0326793684256 81% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0716981132075 0.0861772015684 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0452830188679 0.021408717616 212% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.011320754717 0.011925033212 95% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1398.0 1933.35771543 72% => OK
No of words: 239.0 316.048096192 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84937238494 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.347280334728 0.374742101984 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246861924686 0.28420135186 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.092050209205 0.203846283523 45% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0376569037657 0.137316102897 27% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.14425247246 2.80594681477 76% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.037074148 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569037656904 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 55.8882550514 60.7387585426 92% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 14.9375 20.7743622355 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7189307303 49.517814964 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.375 127.492653851 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9375 20.7743622355 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5625 0.814263465372 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 39.6236924686 49.1944974215 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.34615384615 1.69124875643 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437936937963 0.332605444948 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.130108995461 0.102741220458 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.117898960782 0.0668466124924 176% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.557597502553 0.534860350844 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.191528480047 0.148594505496 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163026927204 0.134430193775 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102493302974 0.0742795772207 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.188847554928 0.324371583561 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0696740874493 0.0638462369009 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253551574975 0.228012699653 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158525683471 0.058150111329 273% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.68436873747 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 2.5751503006 349% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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