Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful, others disagree. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
Many years ago, people were applying for a job using only passport data. Nowadays situation have changed. Employers demand us to fill different application forms, which ask a lot of questions including our personal information, such as matrimonial status, hobbies, interests and list goes on and on. There are people who totally support this system, however there are a lot of employees who strict to controversial opinion. The second group rely that such kind of information is useless for employers. Let’s consider advantages and disadvantages of this situation.
The requiring of personal data coursed by contemporary software that using modern facilities. These software programs can forecast abilities of every single employee taking his or her personal data as basis. To give a clear example, the Intel company have been significantly increasing level of sell of their items for that period of time when their manager invented system of predicting abilities.
However, people who think that requiring personal data is useless have another point of view. They assume that private information could be stolen by stranger and used in other purposes. For instance, two years ago a female employee from my company was stalked by stranger who had illegally obtained information she shared with company. This woman was scared to death and very upset that someone became aware about her private data. To avoid such accidents companies ought to hire a decent security system that can exclude a possibility of stealing private files.
In conclusion, requiring personal information is mandatory for every successful organization. As we know, progress comes with own price, so still this approach requiring some improvements. Anyway, people should be encouraged to support this system, as it eventually will make our world of employment better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Discourse Markers used:
['anyway', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270186335404 0.247107183377 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.17701863354 0.155533422707 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0931677018634 0.0946595960268 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0341614906832 0.0501214627716 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0434782608696 0.0437548338989 99% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121118012422 0.122226691241 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0652173913043 0.0403226058552 162% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83559906875 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0217391304348 0.0326793684256 67% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0652173913043 0.0861772015684 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0186335403727 0.021408717616 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0217391304348 0.011925033212 182% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1851.0 1933.35771543 96% => OK
No of words: 287.0 316.048096192 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.44947735192 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.421602787456 0.374742101984 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.334494773519 0.28420135186 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.257839721254 0.203846283523 126% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.156794425087 0.137316102897 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83559906875 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.037074148 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658536585366 0.56093040696 117% => OK
Word variations: 79.4709000114 60.7387585426 131% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.8823529412 20.7743622355 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2288436522 49.517814964 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.882352941 127.492653851 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7743622355 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 0.814263465372 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 50.3318302931 49.1944974215 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.79268292683 1.69124875643 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293819467344 0.332605444948 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0571647561754 0.102741220458 56% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0477227881635 0.0668466124924 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.439708614729 0.534860350844 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.121716764107 0.148594505496 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948291504898 0.134430193775 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548270522102 0.0742795772207 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.192839034282 0.324371583561 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0392828993056 0.0638462369009 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181249621035 0.228012699653 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074787333545 0.058150111329 129% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.