A Canadian friend recently sent you a present by post. You want to thank him/her.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- Say how you felt when you received the present
- Describe what you like about it
- Explain how you will use the present
Truly delighted – glad
I can’t thank you enough for the gift
Hi Chris,
You can not imagine how I was surprised, when I received a package from you. It was delivered last Sunday and I was so excited to see that it’s from you. When I opened the package I saw there beautiful silk scarf. I have to say that I was truly delighted for your present.
Thank you so much!!
You haven’t forget my taste in colors and the mix of blue and grey looks so wonderful. The silk material feels so soft and looks so beautiful on me. I can’t enough thank you for your attention. I am going to wear the scarf these weekends and will ask my friends to take a photo of mine and send that to you.
So thank you once again and Give my regards to your folk but lots of love to you and Peter.
I’ll write you soon and send that photo.
Best wishes,
Mehriban
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...excited to see that it's from you. When I opened the package I saw there beauti...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'look', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.173913043478 0.220444632235 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.152173913043 0.167888034529 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.070652173913 0.0606518309736 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0597826086957 0.0506257000042 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.163043478261 0.118615021944 137% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0597826086957 0.107062808482 56% => OK
Participles: 0.0163043478261 0.041066498444 40% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.26383567018 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0380434782609 0.0385302599488 99% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0489130434783 0.0714148451538 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0163043478261 0.0191574576366 85% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0163043478261 0.00930345855455 175% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 800.0 1141.60824742 70% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.134020619 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22875816993 5.53046319177 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78085437643 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.21568627451 0.284621296913 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.150326797386 0.211203875043 71% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.104575163399 0.133321485273 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0718954248366 0.0843313296314 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26383567018 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601307189542 0.622163163488 97% => OK
Word variations: 52.2248479992 62.8969750728 83% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 12.9587628866 93% => OK
Sentence length: 12.75 16.4300151701 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2054937262 44.7399317507 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.6666666667 90.9928171075 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.75 16.4300151701 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.613754768223 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 27.7826797386 37.5504026743 74% => OK
Elegance: 0.666666666667 1.13073093955 59% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357319822535 0.331212695627 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0887092621246 0.0927372745006 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.107142062314 0.0736520305886 145% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.596993177297 0.579516596996 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.237326154081 0.180689518051 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152178566996 0.122183219658 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854758951562 0.0765303033291 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.274645784654 0.211926503985 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.106564593236 0.0737400523855 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231534644237 0.203819188451 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541238041803 0.067151250289 81% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.45360824742 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.0206185567 25% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 8.32989690722 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.