People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Behavior defines the character of a person. "If character is lost, everything is lost", goes a popular saying. A variety of factors act in unison in order to shape up the behavior of a person. Whether people's behavior is primarily dependent upon forces not of one's own making is a contentious issue. A stand can be arrived only after careful analysis of this thought from different points of view. However, it seems that, the role of external factors cannot be undermined in determining the behavior of people.
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Sentence: It is true that people must steps on their behalf, in order to improve their behavior.
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