The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made.
The diagram represents the process of ketchup productions.
Overall, there are fifteen stages before it is ready to be served at a table. It begins with picking up tomatoes and ending with the delivery.
To begin with, a picker is picking tomatoes and put them in a basket. After that, the picker is grading tomatoes by its conditions before it sends to the factory for ketchup. At a factory, tomatoes are peeled off the skin and removal of unnecessary parts such as stalk and seeds. After collected in a container, those cleaned tomatoes are crushed and mixed with sugar, vinegar and salt. This mixture is then boiled and cooling down for two hours before it poured into a ketchup bottle. Then these ketchup bottles are passed through labelling and quality control to be packed and ready to be served at the table with fries and hamburgers.
- The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. 61
- By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilt of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
- The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video. 73
- The chart shows a percentage of live births by age of mother for UK and non-UK born mothers, 2015 73
- The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made 77
Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'then', 'such as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242236024845 0.268076937826 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.192546583851 0.116061578633 166% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0496894409938 0.0759168565197 65% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0124223602484 0.0366838410393 34% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0372670807453 0.0131127313244 284% => OK
Prepositions: 0.142857142857 0.155750635184 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0869565217391 0.0379272487307 229% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.43142002546 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0310559006211 0.0210936926555 147% => OK
Particles: 0.0186335403727 0.00175180941692 1064% => OK
Determiners: 0.105590062112 0.0948980150116 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 845.0 1161.00487805 73% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.9 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78767123288 5.90752243213 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73763899035 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.390410958904 0.337110787985 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.267123287671 0.247514529752 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.116438356164 0.171178102325 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0616438356164 0.112407865282 55% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43142002546 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609589041096 0.546246751206 112% => OK
Word variations: 52.6299133193 49.3433353143 107% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.2222222222 23.0094962315 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9960314648 42.9750493124 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8888888889 135.714022679 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 23.0094962315 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.689975730869 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 42.9345509893 47.7609492067 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.94871794872 2.94281807926 66% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142063899628 0.418131533498 34% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116182396354 0.181151798455 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0823233387103 0.0850326197045 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.5743216791 0.706616315825 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167814840682 0.157042692854 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790049967407 0.228904883108 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619182448932 0.108899403657 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.243567587557 0.367819155151 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.176625694102 0.0812612215331 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127239536345 0.316326947829 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525794002589 0.0921553760075 57% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.